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[slybrunette]

Title: I'm Warning You We're Growing Up
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Shannon, Boone
Word Count: 564
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: kayim wanted Shannon/Boone friendship type fic.
Summary: Boone watches her run further and further away from him through glossy photographs.

Boone watches her run further and further away from him through glossy photographs.

Comments

[lovexwentxred]

That was great! I miss Boone and Shannon so much. :( You wrote them wonderfully. I love that the fic is in Boone's perspective.

[slybrunette]

I don't think I've written from Boone's POV so this was definitely a change for me.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[janie_tangerine]

I'm kind of loving all this Boone coming out for the luau. Oh yes.

Back on the matter, this was just perfect. The first thing was such a Boone thing to do, I could totally picture him. You got such a vivid scene there!+

Me, he wants to say, I miss you, but at some point that stopped being enough for her so he just tells her, “We’re grownups now, Shannon, stop acting like a kid.”

The door shuts in his face. It becomes painfully clear right then and there that this isn’t the same girl he used to know.

Ha. Boone and Shannon in two lines. Shannon's voice was also wonderful and the ending with my favorite scene of that whole episode? I got teary. This was really good and I so totally loved it. *sigh*

[slybrunette]

I've always liked Boone, at least in any proximity to Shannon, so it's cool to see him in other pairings/situations too.

I was definitely trying to be very visual with the first part, create a hook, so to say, and draw the reader in, so I'm glad you thought it worked.

I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[demonqueen666]

The opening line of this was so simple yet so powerful, and the rest just kept on delivering. Wonderful job.

[slybrunette]

Aw I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[ladybeth]

I love these two:) I like how you take them from being just friends and how it spirls down.

[slybrunette]

*is so behind with reviews*

I think at the beginning they were just friends. But clearly that went south very quickly, so really I guess it's just...adding to canon.

I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[alemyrddin]

he hates that he still cares when he replies, “She isn’t.”
I love this line. It's just so Boone - he loves her, and he wishes he doesn't.

I also love the idea of them dancing at their parents wedding.

Lovely fic, so bittersweet.

[slybrunette]

I've always had that idea of them dancing in the back of my mind, so I'm glad to finally put it to use, and that you liked it :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!