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[slybrunette]

Title: Just Cause You Feel It Doesn't Mean It's There
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Juliet. Implied Jack/Juliet and if you squint Sawyer/Juliet, Jack/Kate, and Sawyer/Kate.
Word Count: 502
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: Challenge #1 for jacket_whoweare and #38 - Touch for fanfic100
Summary: Post finale. Sometimes she'll forget he isn't there.

Passive

Comments

[slybrunette]

Aw thanks! I don't think I'm the best but I certainly enjoy her :)

I'm glad you liked this!

[navras_rheya]

This was perfect! And if you didn't know already, I love Radiohead, so the "there there" and the title... it all KILLED me! And that ending!

[slybrunette]

I love them too, so I was thrilled that you chose a song by them for the prompt. It worked perfectly for me :)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[elise_509]

I love that Juliet waits too long to go see Jack once she gets back. It's true that at that point, he wouldn't believe she was real. How awful that would be to have him not believe she was truly there.

I also loved the part where Juliet feels like he's there when she stumbles in the jungle, because that's such a Jack moment, reaching out to steady her.

I love the whole thing like mad, but those two parts especially. :)

[slybrunette]

Well they all keep seeing people and what with Jack seeing his father and the path he seems to be going down -- I'm not sure he knows what's real and concrete anymore.

And yeah, it is very Jack, protective and always helping everyone but himself.

I'm glad you liked this hun! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[lovexwentxred]

This was a great fic. I love how you interwove Radiohead's "There,There" into the story as well. That is one of the most beautiful songs and it fits great with the story. Great writing! :)

[slybrunette]

I love the song too, and it was the song chosen for the challenge so that worked out well :)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[eponine119]

This is amazing! A lot of the time I don't like stories that have just the short little sections, but your writing is powerful and lovely enough here to pull it off. Great, great job with this.

[slybrunette]

Sometimes the broken up ones confuse me a bit -- which could just be because I don't spend long enough thinking about them -- so I try to do a little more. Some stories don't need long sections, otherwise they are too drawn out. I thought this may be one of them. But I'm glad you took a chance with me and I'm even happier that you enjoyed it :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing hun!