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Jun 02, 2008 15:10


Title: They Say She's A Beautiful Girl
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Callie. Callie/Erica, implied Callie/Mark
Word Count: 518
Rating: PG
Author's Notes/Warnings: Based on possible spoiler speculation. bebitched made me write this one.
Summary: Post finale. The ties that bind, she thinks, every time her thoughts wander back to when they ( Read more... )

character: lost: charlotte, table: writing_rainbow, ship: ga: callie/erica, character: ga: callie, ship: lost: daniel/charlotte, fandom: lost, ship: ga: mark/callie, !fic, fandom: grey's anatomy

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crickets June 2 2008, 19:18:51 UTC
Aw I really love that Charlotte and Dan fic. Especially that last line. ♥!

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slybrunette June 2 2008, 19:22:02 UTC
*huge sigh of relief*

I've never written her. Frankly the prospect scares me, but since I have to do a larger fic with her in it, I figured this was like getting my toes wet in the shallow end of the pool. So I'm glad you liked hun, that really means a lot to me!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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crickets June 2 2008, 19:41:32 UTC
Well I think you did a great job. I really like Charlotte. There are very few characters in lost that I will write, for some reason, and she's definitely one I hope to add to the list sometime this summer. Along with Daniel.

I even love your little insertion of Miles. It fits perfectly.

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slybrunette June 2 2008, 19:42:31 UTC
Well I'd love to see your take on the two of them, so I'm totally excited for that :)

And again, thank you!

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slybrunette June 2 2008, 19:26:19 UTC
I don't like her either -- but my friend has talked me into writing her in an...interesting pairing, so I best get used to her.

She is...I don't think I really understand her very well and that's why the prospect of writing her terrifies me. She's detached and distant and yet I'm not sure that's really true or why she's like that. It's definitely interesting to write.

I'm glad you liked this hun! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.

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elise_509 June 2 2008, 20:50:56 UTC
This is a really great look at Charlotte, babe, and Daniel too. I like how she see Daniel as this good person always trying to do the right thing, and by implication it seems like she doesn't see that goodness in herself somehow. That seems very true with how they've both behaved since coming to the island and how Daniel's been the more understanding and selfless of the pair. The last line is heartbreaking and perfect.

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slybrunette June 2 2008, 21:03:20 UTC
I really did end up writing Daniel in a way too, didn't I? It would figure, since I really do like him. I don't like her but I like their interaction, I think, and that's where this comes from. And you're exactly right -- how he is overshadows the goodness in her, it's kind of social living in a way, where she doesn't have to be the understanding one, because she is. In a way.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.

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mrslinus17 June 2 2008, 20:56:41 UTC
I like how you brought Miles and Rose into the fic- very good!

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slybrunette June 2 2008, 21:04:08 UTC
Hee, I've never even mentioned Rose I don't think, so it's kind of funny that she ended up here of all places.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.

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citron_presse June 2 2008, 21:03:24 UTC
I like the Callie/Mark story. It's a nice sketch and it would be a good way for the show to go if the speculative spoilers are correct. (I can't comment on the Lost story because I've never seen it!)

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slybrunette June 2 2008, 21:05:55 UTC
I think it's an interesting angle -- though I have no idea if it will go here. It would be nice though.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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