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May 29, 2008 15:31

Title: I Just Want To Try You On
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Shannon/Ana, implied Shannon/Boone
Word Count: 1,357
Rating: PG-13
Timeline: Pre-pilot. This is me trying desperately to fit this into canon time. Takes place sometime after the final flashback in Hearts And Minds.
Summary: She's always wanted to try this. It's the forbidden fruit ( Read more... )

table: un_love_you, character: lost: ana, character: lost: shannon, ship: lost: boone/shannon, ship: lost: ana/shannon, character: lost: boone, fandom: lost, !fic

Comments 15

mrslinus17 May 29 2008, 21:52:52 UTC

Oh wow. Loved this!! Shoone have been getting seriously neglected by fic writers lately. This is great!

slybrunette May 31 2008, 02:30:25 UTC

I totally get the neglect you know, since they're both dead, but sometimes I miss writing them.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

mrslinus17 June 1 2008, 10:59:58 UTC

But dead people are so much fun to write ;]

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slybrunette May 31 2008, 02:35:59 UTC

Your reviews are ♥ seriously, you always leave me speechless.

I think, and this is funny coming from someone like me, that no matter how bad a character is if you write them a certain way, if you view them in a certain light, you can see a reedeming side to them. A lot of people hate Shannon, but those are just people that haven't taken the time to peel back the layers.

Let's face it, Shannon is still relatively young. She had to grow up fast before she was ready because of her father and Sabrina and even Boone to a degree so she gets herself in these situations where she ends up lost. She hasn't got any better judgment because she doesn't know what to do. She's still a little immature, a little childish, very vulnerable.

And yeah, I figured this could do with a good dose of irony. Her kissing Ana is perfect for that, but the list only adds to it right.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and for the fantastic review!

tellshannon815 May 30 2008, 22:48:06 UTC

Not a pairing I'd ever considered before, but got to admit that reading this, it actually works!

slybrunette May 31 2008, 02:37:33 UTC

It's one I'd been thinking about writing for awhile but I just didn't have a scenario until the other night.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

zzjustmezz June 6 2008, 00:23:31 UTC

hot!!!

slybrunette June 6 2008, 01:19:43 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so :)

eponine119 June 6 2008, 01:05:31 UTC

This is great. It seems plausible enough to me, and I think that's a credit to you as a writer. The voices here seem very true -- I could especially hear Ana's gravelly voice in her dialogue. And the last line, whoa.

slybrunette June 6 2008, 01:20:32 UTC

This was something that I found very hard to make plausible but I'm glad you think I pulled it off.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!