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[slybrunette]

Title: This House Smells Of Ghosts
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Claire, many others
Word Count: 1,311
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to 4.10 - Something Nice Back Home. My crack-ish theory on Claire's whereabouts.
Author's Note: For once I think I really put my heart and soul into something. It's weird but bear with me guys, so is the show.
Summary: She

Comments

[slybrunette]

I like it when the audience only knows as much as the protagonist, and that's what I was trying to accomplish here.

I'm glad you liked this! Thank you for reading and for all your support over the past year!

[falafel_fiction]

Great atmospheric piece. I found myself feeling as bewildered as Claire and struggling to place those first two voices (Boone and Shannon?) I knew right away the kinder voice was Charlie, still looking out for Claire and Aaron. Sweet.

[slybrunette]

I like keeping the reader guessing, because at least it keeps them reading. As for those voices, it's actually Boone/Shannon/Ana(would you knock it off?)/Libby(you should stay still). Mostly Shannon, but she's easy to figure out. And I kind of always figured I would have Charlie in there towards the end. I may not be a shipper but it felt right.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[slybrunette]

lol, hope you like it, even if it isn't Claire/Sawyer :(

[slybrunette]

We must be channeling each other, because I certainly don't know where all this came from but it definitely came out.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[aboutbunnies]

Oh, I really liked this. Great theory, and it's written so well, too. I can definitely see this being canon.

[slybrunette]

I was listening to a really creepy, haunting song, and got the idea for this from that. I've been contemplating how to handle Claire's disappearance since Thursday, so I'm glad you liked this!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[bebitched]

I love this. I had a vague idea of who as who (definitely got the Boone and the Ana) and Charlie near the end helping her escape felt so right. There's also that great continuity of Charlie telling Claire that Aaron can't be raised by another and also telling Hurley the same things to relay to jack. Great job!

[slybrunette]

Shannon: “What am I supposed to do? Sign?”
Boone: “You’re not supposed to talk.”
Ana: “Would you knock it off?”
Libby: “You should stay still.”

There's a common thread with all of them.

As for Charlie, that was what I was trying to relate to and, in fact, where the idea came from.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!