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Apr 19, 2008 14:59

Title: Karmic Payback
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sawyer, Michael
Word Count: 567
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: For
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character: lost: sawyer, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: michael

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Re: i really do heart you slybrunette April 20 2008, 17:11:59 UTC

The relationship between those three that we saw while on the raft and the aftermath of that was always very interesting to me. Here are three people who you just wouldn't think would have anything to do with each other, so unlike each other -- and yet they do. It was so multi-dimensional, and I remember wanting to write fic on it, but back then there was no reason for me to, and very little audience who would've seen it.

I don't think Sawyer would've done it. I just...can't see it. I understand why Michael did what he did, but I think there is a difference there between him and Sawyer, and you are right.

There was supposed to be more dialogue but I think it almost would've taken away from the story and what I was trying to say.

Thanks again for a well thought out prompt, and for reading and reviewing!

gottalovev April 20 2008, 00:29:40 UTC

feels very Sawyer to be pissed at someone, and finally just go to Michael and find some kind of mirror. they both did horrible things... very nice fic :)

slybrunette April 21 2008, 21:22:23 UTC

They have both done some very horrible, tragic things, and if you choose to you can see the reasoning for the bulk of them. I think there definitely is a mirror of sorts there, and it was very fun to write it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

speckled_girl April 20 2008, 05:35:24 UTC

This was really in character. I loved the comparison of Sawyer & Michael both having death wishes. It's like Sawyer understands him in a way & now Michael finally understands Sawyer.

slybrunette April 21 2008, 22:04:59 UTC

I think something like this could happen on the show and it might be interesting to see these two interact after the history they have.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

aboutbunnies April 21 2008, 05:23:08 UTC

This is great. Very good characterization of Sawyer - I think he really would find the comparisons between himself and Michael and wouldn't actually go through with killing Michael - and I love the image of Michael on the island, just watching.

slybrunette April 23 2008, 01:53:20 UTC

Sawyer is usually pretty easy for me -- but with Michael involved that notion was thrown completely out the window. So I'm glad that you thought I remained true to his character.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!