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[slybrunette]

Title: Watch As Your Breath Paints Against The Sky
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Juliet
Word Count: 985
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: HERE but also for #9 - Risk at

Comments

[livefortonight]

This is so good. I can really imagine Juliet risking it to see Jack, even just for a short while like this. Love the idea of Juliet working for Ben, too, for some reason. Great fic, thanks for sharing!

[slybrunette]

I swear that Juliet is off the island. I just...I can't process her still being there. So I'm hoping that maybe I'm onto something.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[livefortonight]

I hope so, too! I'm praying for an amazing twist in the finale which is basically THIS FIC. How awesome would that be?

[slybrunette]

Majorly awesome. I do not want her stuck on that island.

[slybrunette]

I'm thrilled that you liked it hun :) Your feedback always makes me smile.

And yeah, I'm so happy that I'm over the writers block and writing pretty frequently. Although sometimes I feel like that's all I do but at least it's something.

Thanks for reading and for reviewing (I like long comments) ♥

[eponine119]

I really liked this. The characterization and interaction between the two of them is so perfect, and the circumstances you've laid out make so much sense and yet were a complete surprise to me. Of course Ben would get Juliet off the island and then try to control her there too.

Are you not on my flist? You should be, I'm adding you. (Hope that's okay.)

[slybrunette]

Ben is possessive, this we know, and I've got a theory that Juliet is not on the island anymore. We don't know otherwise, since she wouldn't count as Oceanic Six, so this is just my way of playing with that.

And yeah, I've always thought about adding you and then got too nervous (and apparently missed you on my adding runthrough yesterday *headdesk*) to do so. So I'm glad you made the first move with that and I'm totally adding you back :)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[allibabab]

When she leans in and presses her lips to his he almost doesn’t see it coming. She’s forward, direct, and he doesn’t expect these things.

Love this! You did a fabulous job with characterizations and voices -- and I love this alternative to Juliet being either dead or still on the island! Thanks so much for sharing.

[slybrunette]

I really doubt she's dead -- I just can't see that. Maybe still on the island, but I hope not.

I'm glad you thought I did well with the characterization -- that's a big thing with me. Thanks for reading!

[siluria]

Very nicely written, I love the whole scenario and the characterisation is spot on!

[slybrunette]

Thanks hun! I'm really kind of in love with this kind of scenario, I just had to find a reason to write it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!