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Mar 19, 2008 16:25

Title: I'll Take The Truth At Any Cost
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sun, Ji Yeon, Aaron
Word Count: 1,103
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Spoilers for 4.07. AU from there, set in the future. He's always known something was off. There are only so many times you can pull the wool over someone's eyes.

He’s always known something was off. There are only so many ( Read more... )

character: lost: ji yeon, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: aaron, character: lost: sun

Comments 15

bebitched March 21 2008, 22:29:48 UTC

There's a lot that I love about this, from the image of Ji Yeon and Aaron living as siblings, to them finding the newspaper clipping, to the reveal that Kate went back to island. I'd love to see some kind of follow up to this, actually, if you're ever up for it. Great job!

slybrunette March 22 2008, 01:45:45 UTC

I figured people were going to ship them, so I did the opposite and turned them into siblings.

I've considered a follow-up but I just don't see that happening. Then again, things change.

Glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

elise_509 April 4 2008, 05:03:06 UTC

It's fascinating to see a fic that projects so much forward into the future. It's something I never really think about except in passing; both Ji Yeon and Aaron are going to have tons and tons of questions - Aaron especially - and you wonder if they'll grow up blissfully ignorant or if they're discover the truth. Even more, I wonder what they'd do once they did have the truth. It would be interesting to see where this fic would go from here. :)

slybrunette April 11 2008, 22:44:49 UTC

It's tough writing that far into the future -- but it's fun too. And I'm kind of thinking about continuing but there is too much of a good thing so I wonder...

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

zelda_zee April 5 2008, 19:15:36 UTC

This was so well done. I thought the kids' characterizations were great, very believable. And the story itself is sad, though I can't help feeling that in the long run it's better that they know the truth, even though it's painful. I'm impressed that you managed an 'end of childhood' story in such a short fic.

slybrunette April 8 2008, 01:44:13 UTC

This was my kind of out on a limb story. I don't usually write kids, I don't like them in fic, but these two are canon and they are much easier to work with if they are teenagers. And yeah, it is better to know versus go through your life believing a set of lies.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!