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Feb 15, 2008 12:30

Title: It's No Cause For Concern
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sayid, Juliet
Word Count: 536
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #89 - Work for
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ship: lost: sayid/juliet, character: lost: sayid, fandom: lost, character: lost: juliet, !fic, table: fanfic100

Comments 12

livefortonight February 15 2008, 18:23:21 UTC

Oooh, very interesting. I love the last line, especially.

slybrunette February 16 2008, 03:37:42 UTC

The last line was not how I wanted to end the story but it kind of refused to go away. Apparently I should listen to my muse.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

gottalovev February 15 2008, 18:59:35 UTC

Juliet want to find Ben... probably that he's threatening her sister, that's what I read of it (would be so... Ben!) so Ben's threatening Juliet's love one while promising helping Sayid's friends. again so Ben!

but I love how they both don't value the importance of their own life versus the ones of the people they care about. very true.

oh and last line love, totally

slybrunette February 16 2008, 03:45:50 UTC

You read it right. Or at least the way I wrote it.

I don't think either of them are all about themselves. They wouldn't do half the things they do if they were.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

failoh February 15 2008, 22:00:12 UTC

The icon's so true, so I had to check this story out.

I'm speechless. Your writing is still beautiful and flawless, they way you describe them is perfect, and that last line is beautiful and pretty much sums up all the flash-forwards we've seen, gorgous and heart-breaking. As is this, " Which means he has something of hers...".

Loved your story!

slybrunette February 16 2008, 20:47:23 UTC

Hee, I really do love how EVERYONE seems to have that icon at this point, lol.

That last line really stood out in my head, though I wasn't sure that this was the place for it, so I'm glad so many of you guys liked it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

kattahj February 15 2008, 22:29:22 UTC

Very lovely - haunting and thoughtworthy, just like the ep.

slybrunette February 16 2008, 20:48:20 UTC

Yeah, that ep was definitely haunting. Makes you wonder.

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slybrunette February 16 2008, 03:47:44 UTC

I keep wanting to write them. I don't know why.

It makes me happy too, for several reasons. Namely there will be a female I can stand lol. I don't know what I would do without her at this point.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!