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[slybrunette]

Title: I've Got A Closet Filled Up To The Brim With The Ghosts Of My Past
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Hurley, Sayid, Jack, mentions of others.
Word Count: 666
Rating: R
Timeline: Post Season 4 premiere (major spoilers for it)
Summary: Nothing that dies on that island stays that way for long. This is a lesson they should have learned a long time ago

Comments

[mrslinus17]

That was so great. Seriously, where do you get your insperation from? The end line is fab.

[slybrunette]

I knew the entirety of last night's episode since last weekend so I had this idea in my head and wrote it directly after the ep last night. It's just the way my mind works.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

[janie_tangerine]

Oh wow. I have been reading your fic for some time and always wanted to give you some fb but never got around to. But I'll definitely do it now because I loved this one. The concept was plain great and the idea makes so much sense, especially after that premiere. Could also make sense for why Jack was going crazy at the end. Sayid was perfect, I could so see him having that conversation with Shannon.. and well, Boone showing up for Jack makes definitely sense. Not for wishing bad on Jack but if it happened on canon I'd be glad. Anyway, gorgeous fic, really. Compliments!

[slybrunette]

I've seen yours around too, but have been equally as busy, so I'll have to try to give fb as well!

I was trying to go off of what we know from the two sets of ff's -- which to be honest is next to nothing -- so I'm glad you thought it fit. Boone would totally haunt Jack, as Shannon would for Sayid, if the Charlie-Hurley thing is anything to go on.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

[slybrunette]

It could, who knows. They are already doing it with the Hurley and Charlie thing.

Glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[elliotsmelliot]

“This is an internal conversation. I am not talking to you, I am talking to myself.”

It's so sad that they are being haunted to death literally or figuratively by the living dead. It's very creepy that the dead are asking them return for those possibly left behind. I like how you left it ambiguous - is it the madness from these visions that are doing them in or their guilt. For Sayid to be felled by this is stunning. Nicely done.

[slybrunette]

How do you know it's the dead and not smokie taking some form? Hmm, things to think about.

Seriously, though, I'm going off of what I saw last night, and that could drive a person mad.

As for Sayid, it could happen. He's a strong-willed individual but it happens.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[slybrunette]

Odd how Hurley is the one seeing things, hearing things, and then Jack goes from 'no way' to singing the 'we have to go back' tune. It just doesn't seem like Hurley could've gotten to him. I have my own theories I guess.

And I totally get what you're saying here -- I'm not sure if I'd want to see this either. I might wonder what the writers were smoking, lol.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!