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Jan 17, 2008 15:22

Title: Set The Example
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Meredith/Lexie.
Word Count: 452
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: Written for Porn Battle V.
Warnings: If you're not into this kind of pairing then don't read it.
Summary: The bad thing about tequila is that once you get enough in you, especially if you're not used to drinking mass amounts of it, you ( Read more... )

challenge: porn battle v, fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic, character: ga: lexie, ship: ga: lexie/meredith, character: ga: meredith

Comments 27

bebitched January 18 2008, 22:54:00 UTC

Because sex and tequila, those are Meredith’s things, that is her area of expertise.

Yep, that makes a lot of sense. This didn't actually squick me as much as I thought it would. So, good job!

slybrunette January 18 2008, 22:55:26 UTC

It's not...squicky if you don't focus on that. Thanks for reading!

gibraltariana January 20 2008, 02:09:12 UTC

I normally do not read incest fics because, well, they're incest fics. However, I saw your name and I figured what the heck. Glad I did, as it was very well written. I liked how you kept the sentences descriptive and yet somewhat less complex than in your other works. It's almost like we're reading someone's thoughts, a la Hemingway, rather than standard narration. Well done.

slybrunette January 20 2008, 03:50:53 UTC

Normally I don't read/write them either. But I'm glad my name being attached to it got you to read it. That means a lot to me.

As for the sentence structure: different fics call for different formats. This one was me attempting to do train of thought, which is how I do smut usually.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

theagonyofblank January 20 2008, 10:09:59 UTC

i've never read meredith/lexie before - not for any particular reason; i just haven't. but this was pretty awesome!

i loved the first sentence, as well as Because sex and tequila, those are Meredith’s things, that is her area of expertise.

slybrunette January 20 2008, 17:54:34 UTC

That line was really me trying to find a rhyme and reason behind this fic, so I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

girlnterrupted January 21 2008, 10:20:14 UTC

LOVE IT.

slybrunette January 21 2008, 20:06:56 UTC

Thanks!

dariclone January 14 2009, 01:16:16 UTC

Loved this Lexie. Also loved the line about Meredith discorvering she had more in common with Lexie than shw knew and how said it was had to find out that way. That was brilliant.