Title: A Touch Of Civility Fandom: Lost Characters/Pairings: Juliet, Ben, mentions of other characters Word Count: 708 Prompt: #93 - Thanksgiving for
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A mischievous LOL to this entire story. Considering we've never really been privy to the normal dynamic of the Others, before our people showed up and everything went to pot, this was pretty impressively realistic.
There's something almost very comedy-of-manners about this piece that I like very much. And yes, the whole go-round-the-table-scenario has been overdone so much as comedy that it's nice it's leavened with actual drama, actual truth. It's a small piece but nicely shows insight to who the character is, as well as showing bits of other characters (I especially liked the bit about Tom).
Ha! This could be canon. Should be canon, actually - I really see all this happening, and you got Ben and Juliet totally right. Kudos again, and sorry if I'm spamming - I'm craving Lostfic right now ;-)
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Nicely written. =]
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I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
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And hey, spam away. I like feedback as much as the next person :)
Glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!
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*doesn't listen because she still has to download the torrent ;-)*
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