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slybrunette

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Aug 22, 2007 22:32

Title: Present Absence
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Kate (implied), several other characters.
Prompt:
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ship: lost: jack/kate, fandom: lost, !fic, challenge: lostsquee, table: 100moods

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slybrunette August 23 2007, 20:55:08 UTC

Thank you so much! The part with Jack in the car was the only thing I had planned out when I first started it, so I'm glad you liked that part.

alemyrddin September 11 2007, 14:06:30 UTC

Great fic, with such a fitting title.
and hey, you made me like jack/kate! Maybe because it was more about Jack caring -which is such a primal instinct for him, and I love him for that- than their supposed "love story".
the last scene, Jack in the car, being there until she needs him and then going away was great.

As for Sawyer, I found so sad that he was in prison... Why didn't Widmore try to mess with his trial too? Or maybe it was Sawyer, with his self-destructive attitude, the one to refuse the deal? (Sorry, I couldn't help it... my brain came up with these tales!)

anyway. I liked this a lot!
:)

slybrunette September 12 2007, 18:56:05 UTC

Thank you! I try to pay a lot of attention to my titles, and I put a lot of thought into this one.

I honestly, regardless of the fact that I am a Jater, am not one of those people who focuses on people's love stories. I don't think that life and relationships are about romances and happily ever afters, so you won't be seeing that in my writing.

As for Sawyer, you're not necessarily too far off on him refusing the deal ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading!

zelda_zee September 12 2007, 16:06:51 UTC

This was really great, very vividly written. I could picture every bit of it. I think you captured Kate really well and I liked Jack's elusive presence that made her feel not quite so alone.

slybrunette September 12 2007, 20:31:20 UTC

Thank you! I never feel comfortable with the way I describe things (I'm much more comfortable with dialogue) so it's nice to hear you could picture it.

gottalovev September 21 2007, 17:24:28 UTC

oh, I don't think I never saw Kate actual trial adressed in itself in fic before and I found it fascinating! very well done.

I love that Jack was still there, in the outskirts. lovely.

slybrunette September 25 2007, 21:27:08 UTC

I've seen it mentioned, and various fics have gone there on ff.net but not in the way I wanted it done.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!