You know, feedback like that totally makes my day :)
Ana wouldn't just let Jack take care of it, because it's different. It's like with the guy who shot her -- she didn't turn him in, she wouldn't identify him, she took him out by herself, by her own hand. She wanted her revenge and she got it.
This is only the second time I've ever written Michael and I tend to make people sympathize with him. I don't know why, i'm not really a fan of him, I guess I just can't write things from people's POV's and then make them into monsters. And you're right, it is harder to smother someone, and I just don't think Michael has that in him.
I was super worried about the last part. It's kind of cold, kind of sick, so I didn't know how that would go over with people, but apparently it didn't bother you too much, so my job is done.
I'm thrilled that you liked this! Thanks for such a great prompt because I would never have written this without it.
A rare moment spent reading luau fic - and you should know that for me to read this one is quite a tip of the hat to you, for there is no character that I hate more in this, or any other, fandom than the Murdering Rat Bastard.
I wish this had actually happened - or that something of equal karmic value occurs in S4. The twist you have given the events, and the perfectly plotted revenge that Ana takes is so very well done. Ana's patience is well played, and the demise of the MRB more than deserved. Great job.
I think you read my only other fic about the Murdering Rat Bastard too actually, lol, so I remember the hatred you harbor for him.
I'm fairly sure karma will get him sooner or later. But I'm glad you liked that little twist (and believe me, you don't want to know what gave me that idea in the first place).
Now, I'm off to read your drabble, and I thank you for reading this fic about the MRB ;)
The first time that they’re both on hatch duty since the shooting she makes a pass at him, which is ridiculous, because he fucking shot her, and now she’s not only decided to forgive him, but she apparently wants to screw him.
Sorry, I think I lost speech power somehwere between "The first time that they’re both on hatch duty since the shooting she makes a pass at him, which is ridiculous, because he fucking shot her, and now she’s not only decided to forgive him, but she apparently wants to screw him" and "The last thing he feels is the cold metal of the knife against his throat, blood, and then nothing."
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Ana wouldn't just let Jack take care of it, because it's different. It's like with the guy who shot her -- she didn't turn him in, she wouldn't identify him, she took him out by herself, by her own hand. She wanted her revenge and she got it.
This is only the second time I've ever written Michael and I tend to make people sympathize with him. I don't know why, i'm not really a fan of him, I guess I just can't write things from people's POV's and then make them into monsters. And you're right, it is harder to smother someone, and I just don't think Michael has that in him.
I was super worried about the last part. It's kind of cold, kind of sick, so I didn't know how that would go over with people, but apparently it didn't bother you too much, so my job is done.
I'm thrilled that you liked this! Thanks for such a great prompt because I would never have written this without it.
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I wish this had actually happened - or that something of equal karmic value occurs in S4. The twist you have given the events, and the perfectly plotted revenge that Ana takes is so very well done. Ana's patience is well played, and the demise of the MRB more than deserved. Great job.
Wanna see how much I hate that bastard? Here is a drabblish thing I wrote some time ago that pretty much sums it up. http://jenthegypsy.livejournal.com/65975.html
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I'm fairly sure karma will get him sooner or later. But I'm glad you liked that little twist (and believe me, you don't want to know what gave me that idea in the first place).
Now, I'm off to read your drabble, and I thank you for reading this fic about the MRB ;)
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The first time that they’re both on hatch duty since the shooting she makes a pass at him, which is ridiculous, because he fucking shot her, and now she’s not only decided to forgive him, but she apparently wants to screw him.
One of my favorite sentences.
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And, on that sentence, would you really want to have sex with the guy who tried to murder you? I mean really? lol
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All those memes say I'm supposed to die during sex anyway.
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Bet you didn't think I would do something like that right?
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