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[slybrunette]

Title: One Step Forward, Two Steps Backward
Fandom: Lost.
Characters: Kate, Jack, Tom.
Prompt: #87 - Scared for

Comments

[slybrunette]

For the record I hope I'm wrong too. Thanks for reading!

[pilot101]

This was a very realistic and moving take on what might happen. Jack and Kate were both completely in character.

I liked this a lot, I mean I hope it doesn't happen on the show. Partly because, dammit! no more jangst! and partly I don't think the writers could portray it half as well as you did.

[slybrunette]

Yeah, I'm just as tired of the constant angsty-ness of the ship. But my friend put the idea for this in my head and there was no stopping me from writing it.

Thanks for reading!

[slybrunette]

Aw, thanks!

[_milz_]

Beautiful story.
It's heartbreaking but I can really see this happening... which sucks.
Great job!

[slybrunette]

Thanks! Unfortunately I feel like we're going to get screwed over and end up with something chock full of angst like this. I still hope not.

[gottalovev]

ow, that's harsh! but very well done, it surely has the lost feel to it, you do it so well. I could see them clearly, great descriptions. poor Kate, I rarely say that, but I feel for her here. Jack was mad, that's understandable, but he was cruel in the way he talked to her.

very well done

[slybrunette]

I kind of thought Jack came out a bit harsh too, but when he gets fired up he says things he totally doesn't mean. Unfortunately.

Thanks for reading, and for the kind words!