Into the Whirlwind - Chapter 10

[slybrarian]

Title: Into the Whirlwind - Chapter 10 / 11
Words: 6,189 this chapter (~63k total)
Previous parts / Summary: Master Post, Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three, Chapter Four, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9
Chapter Note: The calm before the storm. Only, you know, not so much with the calm.

Comments

[ratcreature]

Heh, I feel kind of bad for Woolsey here. He's so trying hard, and I'm really starting to like him.

[slybrarian]

I really like Woolsey too, which is why I made sure to have Woolsey in a sympathetic light. He's really in a bad situation here.

[slybrarian]

Oh, is she ever.

[slybrarian]

Probably tomorrow afternoon. I'm currently going over it one last time and making a few changes and proofreading in between reading articles for school.

[neth_dugan]

*bounces around and huggles story*

This has been a generally miserable day but two parts in the same day?

And he was ACTING? Oh Evan, who can't love you? And artificial wombs, and angsting Rodney and reasuring Teyla and the PROTEST. Oh Valen, that is made of win.

So yes, much love.

[slybrarian]

Lorne is a sneaky Lorne, and is loved by all.

[slybrarian]

Chuck always rocks, but he rocks extra in this chapter.

[thefrogg]

Heee! Giggly!Lorne! Civilians on strike! And Jack's Of course they are!

Seriously, this story's had me grinning so much my cheeks hurt!

Also, one minor grammar thingy:

...even if I have to get Ronon to stun him and carrying him to the altar for me."

Shouldn't that be carry him to the altar?::hides::

[slybrarian]

Jack, at this point, has learned that it's no use trying to pretend things aren't completely FUBAR off-world and go with the flow. Thanks for pointing out the typo.