Hunnybun's synopsis try

[slweippert]

Hunnybun took a stab at this synopsis thing, and except for not including the ending, what'cha think? Would you pick up this book

Comments

[judifilksign]

This looks interesting. I would rephrase the first sentence to avoid the word hell, though. Maybe: "June's life has spun out of control." Also, the word cattery has sexual connotations, it is a term for a whorehouse. "After Peaches takes her to his home," might not have the unintended effect of THAT kind of fall for June.

[slweippert]

Yes, I can see the need to tone down the first sentence.
Odd though, I thought the slang for a whorehouse was cathouse, not cattery. Must look that up...