Comments | slv1987: It started with a dream 8/?

slv1987

It started with a dream 8/?

Nov 17, 2009 18:57

Chapter 9

Comments 22

seelyfey November 18 2009, 02:55:45 UTC

I love where you're taking this. I've had such a blast reading and am so glad you updated. The banter you write comes across really naturally. Great stuff!

slv1987 November 18 2009, 23:18:05 UTC

Thanks loads!! I really struggle with dialogue so glad you liked it! I'm much happier with where this story is heading it just took a while to figure it all out :)

tanama30 November 18 2009, 03:26:58 UTC

what a great chapter. i love that miranda is going to get rid of stephen. update soon great story love it.

slv1987 November 18 2009, 23:21:03 UTC

She'll be getting rud of him in style!! Thanks for commenting, next update on the way :)

associatedbears November 18 2009, 15:03:57 UTC

More, more more please. Thats all. *smirk.

slv1987 November 18 2009, 23:22:23 UTC

Of course more will be delivered asap :) thanks for Reading and commenting it's much appreciated x

cat_copper November 18 2009, 18:20:10 UTC

Like it, entertaining chapter =)
thanks for updating

slv1987 November 18 2009, 23:23:21 UTC

Thanks for reading :) glad you liked the update xx

meli_melo_meryl November 18 2009, 19:21:58 UTC

OMG! That's a really great story! I loved it!Thank you!
I can't wait to read the next update!

slv1987 November 18 2009, 23:24:47 UTC

Thanks very much glad you enjoyed it! More coming very soon x