Fic: The Narrow Path (3/4?, PG-13, Ten/Rose)

[slpy650]

Title: The Narrow Path
Author: slpy650
Beta: tempusdominus10 Thank you!
Characters/Pairings: Ten/Rose
Rating: PG 13
Disclaimer: Doctor Who is the property of the BBC, not me.
Summary: She went deep into the ship. Further than she’d ever gone. She didn’t know what she was expecting.
Author's Note: Rose and the Doctor try to fix things.
Previous Chapters: One (ichi), Two (ni)

Comments

[i_luv_redheads]

ROFL

That last line just about killed me!! I can't wait for the next bit!

[slpy650]

(:

Thank you!

[borntobewild13]

“If you hadn’t showed up I would have done just fine!”

Woah, that's a loaded sentence.

And the ending!!! So mean!!! To think that Ten is carrying Rose's knickers, or maybe his pockets is hooked to everything in the Tardis? But no, if it is, he could fix the control thingy...so he really does carry around Rose's knickers?

...oh, I am having too much time imagining that in my head. Great work! Love it, you convey tension between them so nicely and I can actually feel the little spurts of anger between them.

Thank you for sharing!

[slpy650]

Thank you so much - I'm glad you're enjoying it!

We shall just have to see about those knickers...

(:

[shadowsculptor]

I'm loving it! Also browsed around some of your other fiction and enjoyed it very much. I hope you don't mind the add; I'd love to keep up with your writing. :)

[slpy650]

Thank you! I don't mind at all!

[slpy650]

Who doesn't love some conflict? I gotta have a bit of friction in my fiction...ha (ignore my lameness).

Thank you for the thoughtful comments - really glad to know you're enjoying it. I promise I shall update as soon as possible!

[blackadder72]

I love the entire vibe of this story because admittedly, I have such a thing for a broody, edgy Ten who's more than just slightly knocked off his usual game because of one Rose Tyler. The imagery is especially nice, very elemental with the Storm all around them and something about Rose in red always makes me think of Bad Wolf. A darker, more passionate side that they both try to pretend isn't there, but is so very much there that it scares and confuses them both at times. Good thing they are pretty and adorable in their total doofery, ;)

Very much looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent work!

[slpy650]

Thank you very much! It's a lot of fun writing the ridiculousness of these two as they stumble towards that darker, more passionate side, as you say. I'm really happy you're enjoying it!