SPN fic - abyssus abyssum invocat, Gen, Dean-centred fic

[slob_child]

Title: abyssus abyssum invocat
Fandom: SPN
Rating: R, for some imagery, and for descriptions/implications of torture
Disclaimer: Not mine! Don't sue. Thank you~!
Spoilers: Pretty much all of season 4, though especially 4x10
Wordcount: 728
Summary: Psalm 42  Deep calls to deep in the voice of your waterfalls: all your whirpools and waves have passed over

Comments

[smilla02]

I enjoyed it very much. The broken style, the repetitions, especially. Awesome, awesome work.
And, oh, Dean!

[slob_child]

Sorry it's taken me so long to reply~! I just wanted to thank you for your feedback, it was deeply appreciated, and I'm glad you enjoyed.

[roxymissrose]

Wow, I didn't expect this to be so absorbing. I love the way you've written it as much as what you've written. This is very well done, *very* moving.

Sam doesn’t get it. He doesn’t get it and doesn’t get it and goes on not getting it. There are no words. Dean’s not crying. He’s bleeding.

I thought that line was especially affecting.

[slob_child]

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply - your comment is wonderful, and I truly appreciate the time you took to tell me that the way I told this story worked, and what line was particularly powerful. Thank you.

[extraonions]

I liked the repetition, and the 'side to side' references of Dean's eyes. Well done!

[slob_child]

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply; I'm grateful you took the time to tell me what worked. It's very affirming as a writer to have someone notice the details such as the repetition that I tried to work in for stylistic effect. Thank you.

[henchgirl]

oh, this hurts in such an amazing way. thank you.

[slob_child]

No, thank you for commenting! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, but I'm very glad you enjoyed this.

[zolac_no_miko]

Lol, I want to read this RIGHT NOW but my sense of self-preservation prevents me from looking at it at work. ^_^;;