NT: Chapter Four

Apr 29, 2010 21:08


Title: Nella Tentazione
Genre: Romance; Porn
Word Count: 3296
Pairing: 10051
Universe: Alternate, High School
Warnings: Bad porn. Dub-con. Written in three hours...
Rating: NC-17

Chapter Four )

nella tentazione, fanfiction, khr: 10051

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cookie_meru April 30 2010, 09:23:22 UTC
the update is here! XDD Absolutely gorgeous+hot chapter!! Now I'm satisfied that I can read this story cuz my old account is doing that age-restricting thingy.. neva heard muse's songs that much, but I'm going to now~
I think that this chapter turn out just fine! Really! (like always~) ^^

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sliverly April 30 2010, 11:04:30 UTC
Thank you~ ♥

Age restrictions are no fun, and are really rather pointless. But I don't want to violate terms of service or anything. ^^'

I've been on a Muse-kick lately. I've always liked their music though, so it's a good thing. I don't know, but I feel like those songs fit them in regards to each other. Not 100% but pretty close!

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Time Is Running Out is my favorite too! caffeinexsugar May 1 2010, 06:03:33 UTC
I mean, really XD And I agree, they really fit the canon!

Byakuran is so erratic and manipulative and at the same time cute in this. So IC!! My favorite in this part is when they talk about music like ordinary friends and then Byakuran ruining it altogether lol Ah, your Shou-chan is too cute!!

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Re: Time Is Running Out is my favorite too! sliverly May 1 2010, 15:36:34 UTC
This pairing is single-handedly going to make me fail my exams. I swear. All I wanna do is write when I really, really need to study. D:

I'm glad you think they fit~ I would have included something about Blood Peppers but I felt awkward making something up. ^^'

He would though, they'd be having a moment and he'd ruin it (whether it's intentional or not is the real question). Yea, glad it's not me projecting too much on what I wish they were like. I like for Shouichi to have a spine, but still be impossibly attracted to Byakuran because they're fated DAMMIT, so I do hope he's not coming across as a weak!needy!uke (but he probably is...ugh...)

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yashirin June 2 2010, 09:22:50 UTC
i actually got scared at the start~ bout Shou jumping to conclusion~ i thought it suddenly turned to a weird hellish twist~!!...so glad it didn't... XD shou-chan sooo vulnerable~!! sooo cute~!! XDD

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fruitiegal July 4 2010, 20:14:31 UTC
Holy!Oh my gawd I love your writing sfm!I really want to know what's going to happen next!Please continue to write more!~

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turtlelikelemon August 9 2010, 23:59:13 UTC
Shou-chan can be so dense! XD
I love how Byakuran can be so possessive and overprotective of Shou-chan. It's so adorable and dangerous, its absolutely wrong yet so right..

I was really struck /head shot! when Byakuran said "I never said it was with you~” It's like my world was about to collapse. I though it was a twist for the worse but then again it was just Byakuran's teasing. whew! OTL /alive

Can'w wait for the next chapter.. Hope you'll still update this fic.. It's totally awesome I tell you. Awesome. \o/

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