Comments | slidellra: Pissed, PG-13, HCL

slidellra

Pissed, PG-13, HCL

Sep 15, 2006 08:48

Billy woke up with cold feet. He'd slept in his clothes, as usual, and hadn't made it under the covers. Joe was sprawled across the bottom of the bed, and Billy sort of remembered him stumbling in, muttering to himself, and having to kick him to get his passed-out weight off Billy's feet.

Fuck, it was early. He shouldn't be awake yet. He swung his ( Read more... )

fic: hcl, fic

Comments 6

aukestrel September 15 2006, 15:02:12 UTC

That's sad... sad and seems very real. *sigh*

slidellra September 15 2006, 17:10:07 UTC

They're pretty sad boys. *sighs with you*

Thanks so much for commenting!

exeterlinden October 17 2006, 19:09:33 UTC

Ouch. Poor Billy. Poor them, both of them. Thank you for sharing this, I liked it a lot.

slidellra October 17 2006, 20:55:04 UTC

Thanks so much!

spuffyduds June 18 2007, 14:31:57 UTC

That's great! I love the "pissed on" as both a literal detail and a metaphor.

slidellra June 20 2007, 06:12:33 UTC

Thank you! This is such a weird stub of a fic--my first HCL!--but I like it, and am delighted it worked for you.

Woe! I have, what? Turnbull/Kowalski mpreg and a WW ficlet left for you to read? Clearly, I must write more.

(Got your email. Haven't read yet, but will tomorrow a.m. Am excited.)