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Sep 06, 2006 15:52

Title: Now I've just come ashore
Pairing: F/K
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Many thanks to
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sam80853 September 7 2006, 06:33:03 UTC
Lovely!

But sometimes Fraser still kissed him like the oxygen thing, and he kissed him back the same way. 'Cause getting used to having what you always wanted didn't mean you didn't remember when you didn't have anything at all.

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slidellra September 7 2006, 12:40:06 UTC
Thank you!

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ultra_chrome September 7 2006, 10:28:35 UTC
How gorgeous this is! It has hotness, but that's not the whole of it. It's all in the domesticity of it, and the acceptance of each other's real selves. And how they are so obviously made for each other.

Beautiful!

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slidellra September 7 2006, 13:08:52 UTC
Thank you so much! *loves them*

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j_s_cavalcante September 8 2006, 03:12:01 UTC
Oh, just beautiful. Thank you for posting this!

Oh, the oxygen thing, and oh, Ray's coffee-hot mouth. And oh, Fraser's hand on the back of Ray's neck, unaware.

I sound like Walt Whitman. :) I just adored every word of this. *sighs happily*

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slidellra September 8 2006, 04:47:33 UTC
I'm so happy I could help bring you to the sighing happily place. Thanks for the lovely comment, and for liking the story, and, apparently, for finding the same things sweet/hot that I do.

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mmmarmalade September 26 2006, 09:26:21 UTC
This was just delicious. And the 'skin like oxygen' thing----loved that. :)

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slidellra September 26 2006, 23:35:26 UTC
Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed, and delighted that you enjoyed the "oxygen" line. (I kind of like that one myself.)

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zebra363 October 7 2006, 13:36:40 UTC
Hello, I jumped over here from ds_flashfiction and found this.

'Cause Fraser was so careful in the asking that Ray almost missed it, almost didn't realize that Fraser talking up the pathetic attractions of Moose Foot, Fraser mentioning how good the fishing in the area could be, was Fraser asking him to stay.

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'Cause getting used to having what you always wanted didn't mean you didn't remember when you didn't have anything at all.

Really lovely!

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slidellra October 7 2006, 15:52:48 UTC
Hi! I'm delighted you wandered over and enjoyed your visit. Thanks so much for the kind words!

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