New HCL snippet

Feb 15, 2007 13:15

Title: Capture
Fandom and Pairing: Hard Core Logo, Joe/Billy
Rating: PG-13
Length: 207 words
Notes: Written for the "bleed" prompt at ds_snippets. omphale23 made this better and brainstormed titles. madsciencechick put me in a Joe/Billy mood with her cool, thinky post. Now available as podfic.

Capture )

fic: hcl, fic

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llassah February 15 2007, 20:43:36 UTC
ohh wow. Oh, Joe, you poor sap. That's beautiful, you've got the raw, fucked-up dynamic here so well and god, the stuff you've packed into this, and 'hot and calm and proud'- wow. Just wow

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slidellra February 15 2007, 21:14:46 UTC
I wanted them to make out for you, but they wouldn't. *kicks Billy*

Thanks so much! *beams*

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malnpudl February 15 2007, 20:44:31 UTC
Oh, that's outstanding! Distilled essence of their dynamic. Wow.

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slidellra February 15 2007, 21:19:12 UTC
Thanks, mal! You're going to be snippeting soon, right? *hopes*

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malnpudl February 15 2007, 21:51:40 UTC
Hope to, yeah. Rough week or two, not conducive to writing, but perhaps the fates will smile soon. :-)

And ooooh! Pretty icon! That mouth SO wants kissing. *sigh*

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slidellra February 15 2007, 22:11:58 UTC
*hugs you* So sorry you're going through difficult times. I'm all love and support and no writing pressure whatsoever over here. None. *hopes for smiling fates anyway*

jcjoeyfreak makes gorgeous icons. And Joe is adorable. *sighs with you*

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somewhatdeluded February 15 2007, 21:34:10 UTC
Oh my God, I love you. I just posted another hugelongthinky post and this is, like, the perfect coda to the Joe/Billy segment of my day. ♥ ♥ ♥

Oh Billy. You hot, screwed-up asshole.

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slidellra February 15 2007, 21:55:04 UTC
*is loved* I'm so glad you liked it! Your post was very inspirational.

I love the different perspectives and readings we bring to these texts. I actually don't share your condemnation of Billy that you expanded in your next post. But, golly, I adore you for making me think about them and try to pin down their dynamic.

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somewhatdeluded February 15 2007, 22:12:41 UTC
Hee. I don't actually hate Billy, I just think he definitely should get half the blame for everything that happens while Joe is still alive, +1 for the signoff. What condemnation I have for him is really mostly a reaction to me seeing a lot of fan commentary that blames Joe more heavily than it blames Billy, and they're BOTH totally screwed up. They are, together, the tragic hero of HCL. My take on it is, neither of them is nice, and neither of them is innocent, and by golly, Billy deserves to get roasted every now and again, too.

I am reading again and loving this again! MMM. Beat each other up some more, boys. It's hot.

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omphale23 February 15 2007, 22:16:44 UTC
I love your versions of Joe and Billy. They're so fucked up, and so attached to each other.

And I love that Billy is both manipulative and secretly really pleased by Joe's reactions to him. He's so complex.

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slidellra February 16 2007, 01:29:38 UTC
Big thanks for your help, as always.

Yeah, the varied ways these two feed off each other is fascinating.

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kristiinthedark February 15 2007, 22:32:20 UTC
This is awesome and hot and perfect. I can totally see this happening. *nodsnods*

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slidellra February 16 2007, 01:30:21 UTC
*beams hugely* Thanks, kristi!

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