#440

Apr 26, 2008 20:37

The more I write, the more I disappear.  I don't know how it works and sometimes I don't want to know how it works. Not a poem, but a poem.

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trudy

at our Sunday gathering, Trudy said

line dances align people in neat rows
and columns that form one unit;
it severs participants from the responsibilities and
embarrassments one may experience
while dancing ( Read more... )

personal poetics

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kankeinaize April 27 2008, 04:47:07 UTC
Do I dare disturb the universe?

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sliceofcloud April 27 2008, 04:49:22 UTC
YES. Julie. Julie, Julie, Julie. You deserve an entry.

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sliceofcloud April 27 2008, 04:52:40 UTC
You would have liked to see a Trudy, right? Or am I the only one?

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kankeinaize April 27 2008, 04:57:37 UTC
I think we all want to be Trudy.

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