[exo] honey&lightning - vi

Apr 09, 2014 06:02



Title: Honey&Lightning
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: total ~50k
Pairing: BaekYeol
Genre: hurt/comfort, heavy melodrama
Summary: Lightning never strikes the same place twice.
Warnings: Highlight for full list mentions of past domestic violence, illness, animal death

“I am a ticking time bomb, a fire hazard, this is the calm before the storm. People usually take shelter from the lightning and the rain, Baekhyun, not run straight into the heart of it. )

honeylightning!, p: baekyeol, t: oneshot

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kei17 April 9 2014, 09:36:12 UTC
SPUD

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laurenbaggy April 9 2014, 13:48:43 UTC
I have so many words to say about this but I'm not sure I know how.
It's... wow.

I don't ship baekyeol, and to be honest I don't even know why I clicked it. But I did and I'm so glad I did. (Though that does sort of make me worry about what I miss when I scroll past other potentially amazing fics.)

I started reading this a couple of hours ago and just got so absorbed I didn't stop, even though I have so much to do and now have much less time than anticipated to do it in.
But I don't care because this was totally worth the read and I don't really know how to tell you how much I absolutely adored this.

There are so many quotable parts but the most memorable part for me was Baekhyun cutting Chanyeol's hair and quoting Samson and I almost had a little breakdown.

But this was so beautiful and wonderful and I don't know what to do with myself now that I've finished reading it.

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printedapples April 13 2014, 20:52:20 UTC
wow thank you ;;____;; i'm really glad you enjoyed the story despite the pairing ;;___;; ♡ ahhh it makes me really happy to know you liked the samson scene wanted it in so much but i also didnt really know how to fit it into the story properly and TTAAAATT i'm...glad...you...like it sobs ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ thank you for reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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horramata April 9 2014, 16:07:39 UTC
Ugghhhh…. My heart.

Congratulations for a wonderful job. Loved it, especially how it all came full circle at the end. Someone recommended this on Twitter and said 'it hurt in all the right ways' - and she was absolutely right.

I think you really added something new to the Baekyeol dynamic here I haven't seen before in other fanfics - great job, I know it's not easy to stand out in the mass of Baekyeol fics but you nailed it.

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printedapples April 12 2014, 00:23:43 UTC
thank you for reading!! im glad you enjoyed it :)

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wangbaozi April 9 2014, 16:57:29 UTC
GAAAAAAH
I COULDNT PUT MY GUARD DOWN THE ENTIRE TIME I WAS READING THIS GLORIOUS 50K WORDS WORTH OF FIC

YOU PLAY WITH MY HEART YOU

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printedapples April 12 2014, 00:24:24 UTC
tthank you for reading heuehueheuhehehe plays with your heart some more~

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hoyayayaya April 9 2014, 17:19:02 UTC
hi so i read this around 10pm and it's already 1am and no regrets. i'm so happy i read this fic. the dialogues in here are so on point and authentic, the flow is just right, it's the perfect balance of fluff and angst, and the dynamics of baekyeol makes my heart clench in the best ( and worst! ) way possible and i'm just in a puddle of messy feelings rn. so i want to say thank you. thank you for sharing with us your lovely fic ♡ even tho i'm constantly on edge while reading this amazing piece of work ( i srsly have no idea what's going to happen next ) and i'm not a fan of ( *spoiler* ) open ended stories, i rly rly love this. it just works. and i cried during the samson scene. just. my tears unexpectedly rolled down. that scene is too beautiful :'( now i would think of this story whenever i would hear samson. i'm not sure if this comment even makes sense bc i know i'm just rambling and i'm not used to leaving comments for fics but. thank you for overwhelming me with a roller coaster of emotions ♡♡♡ keep doing whatever you are doing ( ... )

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printedapples April 12 2014, 00:26:03 UTC
!! im glad you liked the samson scene ;__; i feel like i could have done more with it ;;; but im really glad you liked it!!!! thank you ♡ TT A TT

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