[exo] spica

May 23, 2012 00:42



Title: Spica
Rating: Pg-13
Wordcount: 6274
Pairing: BaekYeol
Summary: If the earth and the constellation Virgo are 260 light years away, what then, Chanyeol wonders, is the distance between two human hearts?

“See that bright one up there? It’s a binary star.” Chanyeol stretches out his arm, pointing, and Baekhyun follows the guidelines of his outstretched arm and spots the brilliant light. “That one is my favourite. )

p: baekyeol, t: oneshot

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uchouten May 22 2012, 16:47:13 UTC
OKAY SO ALL BIAS ASIDE THIS FIC IS FLAWLESS PERFECTION
I can’t even think of a coherent comment
You know how much I wanted spica spica is my baby it’s like I wrote it but I didn’t actually because that entails actual talents LOL anyway
Spica can be our baby
I didn’t…write it… but… I dated you. We dated. This is our beautiful child. I am the father of this baby. 
I don’t know what to say anymore.
Chanyeol is so perfect and so cute and aslkdsgjlkgj it’s so sad that he kept his condition a secret so he didn’t upset bacon and then bacon threw aside the letters and I’M AN EMOTIONAL MESS JUST THINKING ABOUT IT I HATE YOU NO MORE DATES WE ARE NOT DATING ANYMORE
Lol that’s a joke I need you but
Asdfgsgakjlsdlgg
It’s beautiful I can’t even think 
Of a coherent comment
And like ten mins ago I thought I should leave you something
You know
Like
With
Content
But this isn’t exactly what I was going for. 
YOU DESERVE SOMUCH MORE
I LOVE YOU
LETS DATE FOREVER.
I legit cried tho I’m not even kidding

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printedapples May 22 2012, 17:24:06 UTC
♥♥♥ LOL, YOU. Thank you for continuously bugging me to write this and putting up with my infuriating slowness YOU HAVE THE PATIENCE OF KRISUS. ♥♥♥

pssshhh i am awaiting my rilakkuma crack in financially capable children!! and MY HAPPY CURRENCYYYY hahahahahahahaha ♥♥♥

don't cry don't haaaaaaateeeeeeeeeee meeeeee waiiiiiiiiiiiiii but i loooooooooove youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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parametre May 22 2012, 17:33:03 UTC
...i am speechless right now.

this is amazing.

just. ahhhhh. your writing is so beautiful and vivid. i really loved this.

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printedapples May 22 2012, 17:55:01 UTC
ajdfhal;dfhlakb thank you so much ;;;;;;;;;;;
let me just spam you with emoticons(●^o^●)( ・ω・)/~ (T▽T) while my brain repairs itself

thank you for reading haato haato! <3

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wakinghyde May 22 2012, 17:47:59 UTC
Oh my god, this is so beautiful. I'M GONNA CRY

I have always wanted to read a blind!Chanyeol fic, mostly because it would be just as heartbreaking as this is. It's so amazing, not too much or too little, and seriously, I'm a little dead inside now. >(

Especially the last part, asdfasdf, so gorgeous. There is consecutive good writing here, but really, THE LAST PART, it gets to me.

I don't know much about stars and constellations and shit like that, but it just fitted this fic so WELL, and it's BEAUTIFUL, and your Chanyeol is beautiful and Baekhyun and grrrr, incoherence is incoherent.

The point is.

This was gorgeous. I wish I had your talent. Please keep writing, you amazing thing<3

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printedapples May 22 2012, 18:08:46 UTC
fuwa fuwa~! ☆ミ☆ミ☆ミ☆ミ☆ミ

I actually feel kind of guilty for bullying fictitious chanyeol like this but heeeeeeey might as well have some fun hehehehe.he.he

truthfully i don't know much about the whole topic of astronomy either but wikipediaismybestfriendcoughcough

thank you so much for your thoughtful comment!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ i really appreciate it :)

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zeraiya May 22 2012, 18:21:31 UTC
This story is amazingly beautiful and thank you so much for writing it. I'm a bit of an emotional wreck at the moment so I apologize that I can't give you the review you really deserve.

This story is so heart-wrenching and it's just so touching. I had this feeling in my gut that Chanyeol was going to go blind when he had that pain in his eyes earlier on in his childhood. Then when nothing more happened I thought that maybe he wasn't going blind because I couldn't imagine him not telling Baekhyun about it. So that moment when he sent those messages in Braille... nothing can explain how I felt. It honestly felt like I was punched in the gut - I was so winded and I even keyboard smashed to my friend who I was talking to on facebook. One moment we were just talking and the next I was all "OMG CHANYEOL IS BLIND WHAT IS THIS I CAN'T DEAL". No joke.

Nothing can explain how happy I felt that the moment Baekhyun realized it was Braille that he called Chanyeol and that Chanyeol answered. My heart really couldn't take Chanyeol thinking that ( ... )

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tonfaed May 23 2012, 11:10:57 UTC
Okay, this is random, but I just wanna say it's cool how I always found you on every Baekyeol fics that I also like haha! And I always read your lovely long ass comments. ♥

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zeraiya May 23 2012, 12:22:47 UTC
>.< guilty as charged... >_>

When I find good Baekyeol fics... I just have to say something. And I'm forever looking for Baekyeol fics... cause... yeah... OTP

I have a serious case of word vomit xD

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printedapples May 23 2012, 13:11:06 UTC
I'm so sorry i took such a long time to reply you but i really wanted to give you a proper response TT__TT ( ... )

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paradisist May 22 2012, 20:11:50 UTC
YOU MADE ME CRY!!!! I haven't cried since I read Absolute Chanyeol, but this has once again screwed up my tear ducts. You are a FABULOUS writer I swear. Forever gonna stalk your future fics. Be prepared.

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printedapples May 23 2012, 11:46:51 UTC
thank you for reading!!! (^u^)♥♥
haha stalking is appreciated, but be warned i am an infuriatingly slow writer OTL

kekeke

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