[FIC] lemon slices. pg-13. tomapi, angst-ish. 7806 words.

Jun 05, 2009 20:08

Title: Lemon Slices
Group: NewS (Yamapi), Ikuta Toma
Pairing/Genre: Tomapi. Kinda angsty.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 7806 words
Summary: When it rains, it pours. Tonight, Yamapi rains all over Toma's parade.
Notes: So I've had this one for a while. k-julia looked it over for me a while ago and gave me some really amazing feedback, but as most of my longer ( Read more... )

fic: news, genre: angst, word count: 5000-10k, pairing: tomapi, fic: ikuta toma, fic: je, rating: pg-13

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salome620 June 5 2009, 16:09:24 UTC
a... that's sweet. sorry i can't find better words. i loved this. thank you for sharing.

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littlealex June 5 2009, 16:33:43 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, even if you can't find any words :D Thank you for commenting! ♥

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amikko June 5 2009, 16:35:55 UTC
both of them breaks my heart, that's how good you portrayed both character. love it. :)

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littlealex June 5 2009, 16:38:53 UTC
Thank you for such a lovely compliment! Sorry it left you a little heartbroken; at least you can see that things could be okay in the end?

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yuumei_nata June 5 2009, 17:11:10 UTC
Well this is just too sweet~ The little parts of angst just made the ending that much lovelier ^^

Thank you for sharing this!

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littlealex June 5 2009, 18:05:25 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting :D

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oroja June 5 2009, 17:17:33 UTC
I love this very much...
They are so lost but thank God that they found each other.
Thank you for this great fic!

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littlealex June 5 2009, 18:06:00 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! It is lucky they have each other, yes ♥ Thank you for commenting :D

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jtriskell June 5 2009, 18:27:54 UTC
littlealex June 5 2009, 18:28:28 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting :)

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