[FIC] american smoke. pg-13. gen. 3754 words.

[littlealex]

Title: American Smoke
Group: KAT-TUN
Pairing/Genre: Jin-centric, gen
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3754 words
Disclaimer: These boys belong to someone else.
Summary: This is a story about Jin's coping methods and their consequences.
Author's Notes: Without the help of pithetaphish, this story would be unbearably wrong. It was surprisingly easy to edit, two months

Comments

[tangiblewhimsy]

This was incredibly insightful and amusing. I don't know why no one has said anything yet, but good job. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

This piece feels like it can easily stand alone. The fact that there is more to come makes me curious to see where you might be taking it. I look forward to additional works.

[littlealex]

Thanks for commenting! I think it was skipped over by a lot of people because when I first posted it to the comms, I messed up the link. At least, that's what I'm going to tell myself. ;)

I think I just love the whole period of Jin going to LA, it just begs to be explored. So whether or not there'll be something directly related to this, I'll probably always want to write this period of time for KAT-TUN. ;)

Thanks again for your comment! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[tangiblewhimsy]

I know exactly what you mean. KAT-TUN as a group is actually quite fascinating for how differently they have always interacted with one another, but their group dynamics took an odd hit when Jin made that seemingly random decision to wander off to the other side of the planet.

Things have gotten better now, but it's not really something I'm ever going to stop wondering about.

[baybeshyne]

i really loved this fic!
jin, always the rebel!
and loved how he was most terrified about kame finding out rather than his boss! LOL
LOVED devious lil kame! he succeeded in blackmailing jin!

[littlealex]

Thank you~! I'm glad you liked it. I think that Jin would always be more worried about what Kame had to say about his actions than anyone else. ;)

[guiliheye]

Your Johnny-san is totally made of win, yo! XDD

I think it was great effort with the conversation between Jin and Kame.. Because srsly, we hardly hear *any* from them and it's hard to imagine them in a casual chit-chat.

So, good job! :DD

[littlealex]

haha, I know right? What a kind man, letting one of his most popular stars keep his job. ;)

I think I enjoyed the conversation between them the most. I don't know if I ship them or anything, but they would have been such good friends, and I can see how Jin leaving could create a rift. It would be awkward.

I'm glad you liked it! :D

ps, I like your screen name. Kame saying his name in Chinese is adorable. ;)

[ununoriginal]

this was a really interesting take on jin's mindset, and also his view of kame. u did a wonderful job of portraying the tenuous dynamic of their r/ship :)

[littlealex]

Thank you! I"m glad you liked it. :D I think the relationship between Jin and Kame is my favorite to explore - shipping them or not. ;)

[jo_lasalle]

This was nice. :-) I approve of cautiously rebellious Jin. *g*

"Besides, I'm older than you."

I loved that. That whole exchange worked very well, but especially when it got nonsensical there; that sounded very real.

[littlealex]

Yes, cautiously rebellious is one of my favorite ways to write Jin ;) also, I figure he has a limited amount of serious, logical arguments in him before he brings it to something unrelated like age. He's not a great debater. Of course writing Jin and Kame's conversation was my favorite. I'm not sure I believe in Akame yet, but I love writing their relationship. I realy need an Akame icon...