[FIC] flower press. g. arashi, aiba/ohno romance~ 989 words.

[littlealex]

Title: Flower Press
Group: Arashi
Pairing/Genre: Aiba/Ohno, ~romance~
Rating: G
Word Count: 989 words
Summary: Nobody else quite understands the freedom of lying in a field, complete silence surrounding them.
Note: Written for my rainbowfilling prompt table! The prompt was "bluebells". I have a Supernatural fic titled the same thing, but my defence is that I

Comments

[deelovesryo]

Loved it!
Love the athmosphere of the fic and the paralellism with the flower and also the flow of time,
not only of just that moment but of their relationship through Ohno and Aiba's reflections.
Thanks for sharing, a very enjoyable Ohba!

[littlealex]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a hard time wrangling that atmosphere but I think I got it in the end. ♥ Thank you for commenting!

[waxrose]

This was so pretty. The way you use words is so gorgeous and vivid.

[littlealex]

♥ I had some issues working out the flow, but once I set my mind to it, it just worked. I'm glad you liked it~~

[phrenk]

Oh gosh, it got even better. This is lovely. ♥

[littlealex]

hee :D:D I'm glad you liked this version better!

[lucky_papi]

Loved it! Thanks!

[dirtbaguette]

hi casually making my way through your writing

but oh my i am actually so in love with the style of your writing and the way it feels like looking at a canvas covered soothing pastels but with bright, lively acrylics at all the important points (<-- inept art metaphor is inept oops). PLUS YOU TREAT THE ROMANTIC IN ME SO WELL. ;A; <3

[littlealex]

seriously how do i not have an aiba icon he is the beautifulest... and computer, beautifulest isn't a word, please put squiggles under my words okay.

aaaaaaaaah I love that metaphor! I think it fits this fic as well. The twilight makes it feel all soft, and so do Aiba and Ohno, because they're just as soft and squishy as their feelings. ♥ I never used to write much romance, but I've done it lately, and it just feels so good~ I'm glad you liked it!