Slayers fic: The Human Ingredient Ch. 1

[ryals_shoal]

Hello y'all! I'm a long time lurker first time fic poster!

Title: The Human Ingredient
Pairing: Eventual Z/X
Genre: Drama, Angst, AU
Author: ryals_shoal
Rating: PG-13 (for now!)
Wordcount: 3,609
Warnings: (Warnings will be specific to chapters) this one: language, violence
Disclaimer: The Slayers is the copyrighted property of Hajime Kanzaka. This is a

Comments

[travellyr]

This is intriguing. I'm very interested to see where you go with this.

[ryals_shoal]

Thanks for reading! ^^

[siderealstrings]

Eeeeeeenteresting. Hearing different takes on Xelloss's origins is so much fun. Your descriptions are really good--I particularly like,"Greater Beast Zellas Metalliam sat upon her throne of bones and pelts, gold bracelets jingled musically as one well manicured finger tapped the cigarette stick." Lovely. Oh, and I like that Zelas uses "thee" and "thy." ^_^ Makes me happy.

[ryals_shoal]

Well, she IS ancient, and classy. Plus, I thought it would be nifty if she talked all Shakspearean like, but it was really hard use "thee", "thine" and "thy" without getting too repetative, but so far no one has pointed out any bad usage ^^; THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING! =^_^=

[daedra_lord]

Hope to see more of this soon ^_^ I especially like your descriptions of everything.

[ryals_shoal]

Thank you! I worked hard at that @_@; describing things can be hard!

[ryals_shoal]

Thank you very much! ^^ And yes, it is going to be a darkish plot, but I had to throw in some Slayersish humor before things got too serious! ^^;