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[nightfallrising]

Disclaimer: characters property of Software Sculpters etc.
Series: Blind Glory
Worksafe
Pairings: Under negotiation. (but if Zel/Xel squicks you out, this is probably not the fic for you.)
Warnings: eventual slashiness, and also, this is set after the series.
Feedback: is enshrined, and concrit is also welcome, when welmannered.

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Comments

[siderealstrings]

I have basically no idea what's going on at this point, but I'm loving every minute of it. And I can't wait to find out. And Amelia's knife thoroughly thrills me.

Minor Typo: "fingering her sorceress’s cloak in a away that made Zelgadis"

[nightfallrising]

Oh, thanks--fixed. ^,^;

If you can't figure out what's going on, it's because very little *is* going on at the moment; don't worry about that. There should be a little more action in the next chapter.

Amelia-san's knife thrills me, too. Right down the spine, with horror. And terror. Brrr!

[anonymous]

*snickersnickersnicker* AWESOME. Amelia's knife is the most ridiculous piece of cutlery and it's utterly Amelia.
I _still_ do not know exactly what is going on, or what Lina thinks is going on, and I'm not completely sure what Amelia thinks is going on, but all that is just part of the appeal.
POST, POST fair writer, so that I may know more.

[nightfallrising]

Well, like I said up there, nothing's really going on yet. But as for what the girls think is going on--that's not going anywhere, so I don't mind explaining until I find a way to smooth it out better (I'm always WIP ^,^;).

Amelia thinks Xellos is under the impression that he can change his alignment to Lawful Good with a costume change, like some kind of comic-book antihero. Lina thinks maybe he thinks that's not a bad first step towards turning his life around, and she knows the power of presentation, so she's not sure she disagrees.

[nightfallrising]

Gourry is such a sweetie. I'd say he needs more cuddling, but he doesn't seem much interested when he gets it...

This wasn't a bad chapter for him; he got in a couple of those 'Am I an idiot or am I perceptive' moments in the last edit, which was nice.

[ashkaztra]

Not the most eventful chapter, as you said yourself in the comments, but there's a lot of very nice little details. Amelia's knife is bloody scary, in the best way possible. And it's so very Amelia, too.

And I love the bit about Lina when she's hungry.