"Death Does Not Become Him" Chapter 11 Orlibean

[slave_o_spike]

Yes, I know.

I've been bad.

I'm sorry.

I've been taking a much needed break. But I'm back.

And here's the next chapter.

It's kind of a pivotal one. :)

Title: Death Does Not Become HimChapter 11

Comments

[cereajeb]

*eyes narrow* oh, THAT is not fair! you can't make orlando take a potentially dangerous detour when he's finally got up the nerve to tell sean! *pouts*

I really, really liked Maureen, particularly since she actually managed to knock sense into orli when even viggo couldnt do it. for me, her story was even more tragic, because a character in one of my other fandoms is named maureen and i had to keep reminding myself they werent the same person; otherwise, I would have been balling :(

excellent update, can't wait for the next chapter, and im so glad you're back!

[slave_o_spike]

Never fear. All will become clear.

I should make that into a bumper sticker. :)

I know what you mean about name association. Whenever I hear a name in a story that means something to me, I immediately put that person into the same role and I get all emotional too. Happens to most of us. LOL!

Thank you! And I'm glad to be back! :D

[blueskydancers]

Great to see you back - so glad to have a new chapter to read! Like the others I have a very bad feeling about the detour...

[slave_o_spike]

Yeah...the detour...

All shall be revealed soon enough. :)

Thank you!!!!

[pecos]

I'm thrilled to see a new chapter, and such a good one too! I had tears in my eyes with Maureen!

[slave_o_spike]

I love Maureen. As I told someone above, I came up with the idea for her sitting on a bench waiting for hubby to come get me (he went to another store at the same time). I put myself in her place and I think this is the way I would feel.

Thank you!!! Next chapter won't take so long. :)

[giselleslash]

Hurrah! You're back!

Booooo! Orlando's on a detour!

I'm afraid this detour might be of "Epic Proportions" when all's said and done. I'll just sit here and stew in my own curiosity and impatience for the next chapter.

[slave_o_spike]

Woo Hoo! I just made my way back over enemy lines (seriously, RL has been waaaay too hectic) - the enemy lines being dealing with sick kids and employee problems.

Yeah, Orli's on a detour. But things have a way of ...well...I will be posting the next chapter this week as well as a one-shot I just wrote.

I've decided that I will write everyday no matter what's going on - for my sanity as well as everyone else's here at home. LOL!

Thanks girl!

[ireth06]

You're back! Missed this!

Lovely chapter!
The part of Billy's car breaking down was sort of a deja vu from what Maureen just told him ... I hope he will get around to tell Sean the truth ... and safe him at the same time ...

Thanks for sharing, hun! Hugs and kisses!

[slave_o_spike]

I'm back again. Like PMS or some such shite! :P

Seriously, I am back.

*hugs and kisses you back*

Yes, it is a kind of portent - Billy's car breaking down being compared to what happened with Maureen. I don't want to tell you what happens next, but Orli will be sticking to what he decided - to tell Sean everything - it's just that some things will have to be dealt with first.

Thank you for the great fb! :)