"Death Does Not Become Him" Chapter 9 Orlibean

Mar 18, 2008 05:11

Title: Death Does Not Become HimChapter 9 ( Read more... )

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doylebaby March 18 2008, 17:58:20 UTC
Orlando, love, you can't hide your secret forever, you have to come clean.

I love Sean and Eric teasing Orlando with the hammer antics.

*cackles* Elijah's profession and Dom and Billy's behaviour fit in with Orlando perfectly!

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slave_o_spike March 20 2008, 00:41:13 UTC
Orlando, love, you can't hide your secret forever, you have to come clean.

But he'll try! LOL!

I know! Eric and Sean are fun that way. :)

I had to think carefully about what kind of people Orli would hang with.

It would be them. *nods head* A mortician and guys who thought it was okay to pass themselves off as a dead body.

Thank you!!!

PS. I'm going to leave you fb on two of your fics that I loved!

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doylebaby March 20 2008, 00:52:46 UTC
A mortician and guys who thought it was okay to pass themselves off as a dead body.

They're quite mad - in a good way, and Orlando must feel right at home with them.

PS. I'm going to leave you fb on two of your fics that I loved!
It's always great to hear from you. :)

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izzicat March 18 2008, 18:57:24 UTC
Thanks for another fun but angsty chapter.
I hope he can save his Sean.
xxx

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slave_o_spike March 20 2008, 00:43:40 UTC
I hope he can save his Sean.

Me too!

Oh wait...

LOL! Thank you!!

xoxoxo

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simplyshanni March 18 2008, 19:07:08 UTC
Hey Sweetie ( ... )

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slave_o_spike March 20 2008, 01:24:54 UTC
Can those two EVER make love without destroying or knocking something over? Nope - don't think so. Their love is sexy, but hazardous! LOL ( ... )

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simplyshanni March 20 2008, 07:22:33 UTC
Yeah, I've noticed! They're HOT, but definitely kind of dangerous! Not to mention freaking hilarious! Just the way I like them, actually ( ... )

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slave_o_spike March 20 2008, 07:50:34 UTC
No! You are totally spot on! He has been burned in the past, when he's said the truth. I just meant, these lovers weren't too terribly important to him. That's why he's frozen in place. :P

Yep, I talked about Snyder before. He's the dog of the accountant my sister-in-law works for. The dog hangs out at their office. Like a mascot and he acts just like this. The accountant's daughter and son used to work for me and they both talked endlessly about Snyder and how vicious he could be.

My jailbird cook is dating that daughter and he said Snyder keeps him from sneaking into her room. LOL!

(Yes, he is 40 and she is 21 - I know!!!!)

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ireth06 March 18 2008, 20:26:05 UTC
Not everybody can get away with seriousness mixed up with hilarity! But you do!

Absolutely lovely chapter!

Can't wait to find out more! Is there someone out to get Sean? If so why? Will Orli stop 'them' whoever it is? It's not that I expect you to answer all this right away... it's just some things that keep me occupied when reading this ....

Lovezzz!!!! More soon please!

Thanks for sharing, hugs and kisses!

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slave_o_spike March 20 2008, 00:52:18 UTC
I get away with a lot. LOL!

Thank you! *hugs you back and smooches you madly*

Your questions will all be answered in due time. No worries. :)

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cereajeb March 19 2008, 01:21:11 UTC
i LOVED this chapter. seriously, im considering eloping with it...it was like a freaking roller coaster! one second im feeling sad and angsty and sorry for orlando, the next im laughing my ass off at the idea of dom posing as a dead body for sex :) that, my dear, can only be a sign of true talent.

however, im on the verge of strangling both orlando and sean - the first for not JUST TELLING HIM ALREADY, and the second for apparently REALLY pissing someone off...

btw, should we be worried at all about the newspaper rustling? i mean, it was just snyder, si? *is nervous*

another amazing chapter (seriously, how do you DO this?!). kudos, and please, for my sanity (what little there is left) update soon!

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slave_o_spike March 20 2008, 01:01:46 UTC
I'm not sure if me turning Dom into a dead body model is true talent or some seriously crossed wires! LOL!

Who's to say Sean pissed anyone off? You'll see...

*pets Orli*

He's just feeling a bit apprehensive.

Nope, the newspaper rustling is just Snyder leaving a 'present.'

I'll try to update sooner, I promise. RL, you know. *shrugs*

How do I do this? My mind's a scary scary place...

Thank you! You may kiss the bride!!!!

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