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slave_o_spike

"Justin's Baby" Chapter 5 Brian/Justin

Sep 06, 2007 17:15

So here it is!

Chapter 5! Can I hear a Woo-hoo!?!?!

This felt like giving birth since I was in and out of being sick while trying to complete it. :)

I want to say thank you thank you to my beta, shadownyc for reading it over and correcting my mistakes (especially since my 'a' button on my laptop keeps sticking ( Read more... )

justins baby

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herberta2006 September 7 2007, 00:42:23 UTC

Killing Ethan is always a good choice. :P

slave_o_spike September 10 2007, 06:18:47 UTC

LOL! I think THAT needs to be on an icon!!!!!!

Thank you!!!

sevigny7 September 7 2007, 00:53:25 UTC

Hey Maria - I've been wondering what happened to you, so I'm so v. v. happy to see this update. I lost it at the mental image of Ethan zooming past the window with arms and legs flailing as he bounced on the conveniently located trampoline. I also lost it at the image of a man not being able to handle menstrual cramps. You're genius incarnate.

slave_o_spike September 10 2007, 06:17:58 UTC

Here I am!!!! *bounces around*

I know. Ethan going up and down...*shakes head and bites lip*

It was a conveniently located trampoline, wasn't it?

Men with menstrual cramps! Could you see a man being able to handle it?!?! LOL! LOL! LOL!

Thank you!!!!! *hugs you*

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slave_o_spike September 10 2007, 06:15:53 UTC

I would have paid good money to have seen that happen to Ian on the show.

But it was Showtime, not HBO...

And YES! Men can't handle the pain, which is why women go through this once a month and men DON'T, hence, mpreg fic is kinda weird...

You know, I would have paid good money to have seen a preggers!Justin on the show.

But it was Showtime, not the SciFi channel...

Thank you!!!! I'm glad to NOT be sick. It does so suck. And thanks for the fb!!!!

shadownyc September 7 2007, 01:37:33 UTC

Mikey Jr. and Domestic Mel...what a combo! This actually makes me feel bad for Lindsay and that's a miracle. LOL

slave_o_spike September 10 2007, 06:05:10 UTC

I know. Lindsay is like one of the characters that I could never feel for. She was boring and then she was a cheater.

That's why I give her a personality in my stories - so I can write her with some pathos. LOL!

And living with Stepford!Mel and Mikey Jr - all I can say is, That. Is. Hell!!!!

Thanks Shadow and thank you so much for the beta again. *kisses and hugs you*

lady_erzulie September 7 2007, 01:56:12 UTC

i'm gonna quote my fav lines.

"Oh my lord," Emmett gasped as everyone rushed to the window. "Was that Ethan that just fell past the window?" Emmett was the first to look down at the sidewalk where he knew Ethan would be lying when they watched as Ethan passed their window again, only this time going up.

"Hey!" Ted said, "He fell and landed on that trampoline that's on the back of that truck that's in front of the building."

"Help me!" Ethan yelled again as he passed the window a third time, only plummeting down to the sidewalk.

"What do we do?" Justin asked worriedly.

"He'll be fine as long as that truck doesn't," Joe started and then winced. "Oh...the truck moved. Yeah...he's a splatter on the sidewalk."

This one hit him especially hard and he doubled over onto the floor. "No, not now. Not in front of these people...hurts...too much..."omfg!!!!! lol lol lol ( ... )

slave_o_spike September 10 2007, 06:02:54 UTC

I think this will be the only time in fanfic (QAF) history where Ethan will have been portrayed as remotely interesting. LOL!!!!

If the devil looked like Brian? Then I'll kick myself from here to well...somewhere far...for being scared of him when I was 12 (I was raised Catholic and I was told some horrific stories).

I love that you're loving this. Thank you Thank you!!!!!

lady_erzulie September 10 2007, 18:50:27 UTC

If the devil looked like Brian? Then I'll kick myself from here to well...somewhere far...for being scared of him when I was 12 (I was raised Catholic and I was told some horrific stories).

lol. me too!!! i'm catholic too and sunday school was the worst with the devil stories. if the devil does or did look like brian, well i can't fault anyone for sinning and stuff. it'd be like, a natural decision (we are such baaaddd catholics lol).

you're welcome!!! just write another chapter of justin's baby!!!!

oh where, oh where has cannibal!fic gone???

slave_o_spike September 12 2007, 01:25:20 UTC

You and Bunny! Asking for cannibalfic. Don't worry though. I have not abandoned it. It's just that the subject matter is such that I must think it out very carefully and be very witty.

I have an outline of the story and know where I'm going, it's just keeping it light-hearted and funny at the same time...

I just want to do the story justice. :)

And yes, we are very very bad Catholics. Well, if we were STILL Catholic, that is. :)