QaF Fic "Through a Mirror, Darkly" Chapter 24

[slave_o_spike]

Well, here it is!

The long awaited chapter!

I want to thank shadownyc for going over it and making sure it flowed right and wasn't too confusing.

Also, I will get back to fb from the last chapter - I just wanted to concentrate on this!

Enjoy!

Comments

[das_vroni]

I will NOT squee, no, no.....
Love it!!!!
*fat grin*

[slave_o_spike]

Fat grins are okay too. :D

Thanks!!!

Remember, one chapter to go.

[brianswalk]

Yay!!!!! I'm so glad I came home for lunch. LOVED IT! I'll leave proper FB tonight!

[slave_o_spike]

Talk to me later. LOL!

[singlewoman]

THANK YOU for finally bring Brian and Justin together. I have to tell you that I held my breath through most of this chapter, and not breathing at work is frowned on.

The courage and love that both Brians displayed in the face of the Guardians was very well done. I liked the fact that the Guardians were "reading" the Brians, assessing their worth. I pity the guardian(s) that let this all take place, they are not going to like the consequences.

Joe is great. "Joe," Joe said, "and you owe me pie." I can here this line in that distinct Buscemi way. And this just made me laugh. "Brian!" Michael yelled as he came running over. "Jesus! You're okay. Shit, all that screaming and moaning...."

"Yeah, and that was just from monkey boy," Joe said as he pointed to Michael.

This has been a great ride and I am glad it is not quite over.

[slave_o_spike]

I was hoping that this got across - that Brian was able to do this, because this was his main problem on the show (the one Cowlip was trying to constantly exploit) his inability with confrontation.

Whew!

And Joe, yeah, I love Joe.

And nope, not quite over. One more chapter to go. Thanks!!!

[show_by_letters]

"I love you. I love you so much," Brian said as he rained kisses down on Justin's face. "I never want to be away form this again. I love you," Brian said as he crushed Justin to him yet again.
Justin stepped back from Brian. "Jo! You gave us the wrong Brian!" Justin said in a panic.

*laughs* Finally, they are together! This was so great =)

[slave_o_spike]

I know! It only took me 24 chapters to do it too!

*wipes forehead*

Had to keep the humor in! :)

Thank you.

One more chapter to go...

[show_by_letters]

I’m really looking forward to it., how will Brian be now that he knows what it’s like to not have Justin, to really not have him.

You know, if someone told me about a qaf fic with parallel worlds, with walls that move and monsters that want to eat you alive (or suck out all your energy) I would have laughed and not have given it a second glance, but you not only made it good, you made it enjoyable.

[slave_o_spike]

LOL! Someone said the exact same thing about my cannibal!crackfic way back when.

I can't believe I wrote a QaF story with 60's style horror movie stuff...and it was well received! I was extremely hesitant to post this but the stats speak for themselves.

Thank you for that. It's always great to hear someone like my story despite what the premise is. :)

[xie_xie_xie]

Sigh, thank you, now I can live!!!!!!!!

*throws self down on bed and finally is able to sleep*

[slave_o_spike]

But, but, what did you think?!

LOL! You sent bunny after me!!!

So should I wait for you to catch up on your sleep so I can get some fb?

*taps foot*

[xie_xie_xie]

I'm prepping for a press conference, I will fb right after! I love this fic like woah!