Ah, all right. I wasn't sure if I just missed something or not. I finished it up pretty late last night.
In terms of the creatures growth. The young are growing, but the rate at which they are growing--which is fairly quickly--isn't clear. They reach stages where they won't be affected, or have the ability to burn. But it was all a little hazy. However, I think that would be fairly easily covered with a bit more detail about what the creatures looked like. It's not really a big thing more just something to think about.
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In terms of the creatures growth. The young are growing, but the rate at which they are growing--which is fairly quickly--isn't clear. They reach stages where they won't be affected, or have the ability to burn. But it was all a little hazy. However, I think that would be fairly easily covered with a bit more detail about what the creatures looked like. It's not really a big thing more just something to think about.
Thanks for sharing with me. ;)
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