Comments | slashing_lorne: Fic Exchange: Falling Toward the Sky (Lorne/Zelenka, NC-17)

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Fic Exchange: Falling Toward the Sky (Lorne/Zelenka, NC-17)

Apr 16, 2011 18:25

Recipient: sexycazzy
Title: Falling Toward the Sky
Pairings: Lorne/Zelenka (background mentions of Sheppard/McKay, brief Zelenka/OMC)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5192
Summary: Lorne and Zelenka both want more than they have, and find it when Beckett brings them together... but it's not until DADT is repealed that they find everything they want.
Warnings: ( Read more... )

pairings: lorne/zelenka, fic exchange- 01, author: sublimatedangel

Comments 7

fififolle April 17 2011, 07:41:34 UTC

Wow. That was simply stunning. Perfect little moments, spellbinding emotion, building to a fantastic climax. *claps wildly*
LOL to Beckett and his little scheme :D I liked Matthew a lot, bless him. And my god, Lorne's way around DADT - stunning. I've never read anything like that, which seems obvious now, hahaha. GUH.
Brilliant. Quite, quite beautiful.

sublimatedangel April 22 2011, 16:16:52 UTC

Thank you so much!

Heh... I really like Beckett, and the role of matchmaker just seems to suit him. Ah, poor Matthew... I like to think that he ended up with a happily ever after too, with someone just as sweetly vanilla as him.

The look-but-don't-touch thing is probably more a reflection of my kinks than it is about the recipient, but it's always seemed like an interesting way to handle DADT and gave me a great way to focus on how the repeal would change their relationship. I'm really glad it worked for you.

Thanks so much for the comments - they mean so much :)

sexycazzy April 17 2011, 13:21:53 UTC

Wow...THANK YOU!

This is brilliant, a bit speechless just now...but will be back with a more proper comment!

:-)

Re: sublimatedangel April 22 2011, 16:17:59 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it.

sexycazzy June 14 2011, 10:43:28 UTC

Re-read this and still so good!

Loved the idea of Dr Beckett as a matchmaker!

I also loved the light use of D/s & kink - I love it when these are used in a fic! Esp. after the repeal of DADT has made them really act on the D/s more.

Thank you again for doing this!

clwilson2006 April 17 2011, 15:22:26 UTC

incredible.

really really awesome work.

thank you for sharing

off_the_post18 April 20 2011, 04:20:05 UTC

Dr. Beckett, Matchmaker. *loves* Sounds like the title of a perfect television show.

Not usually my kink, but I enjoyed the story a lot. Very Mrow! Radek and Lorne is a lovely combination.