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slashfanatic22

Adjusting (part5/6)

Jul 05, 2011 20:16

Title: Adjusting (part 5/?)
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter)
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo (eventually)
Warning: I decided that Tony would have already been engaged and they had called it off before he met Gibbs.
A/N: Same...I decided to cut the chapters in half so instead of just 3, It'll be more like 5 or 6 :)
Characters: Sick!Tony, Concerned!Gibbs
Summary: Tony ( Read more... )

gibbs/dinozzo, pg-13, slash, ncis

Comments 13

jimpage363 July 6 2011, 01:00:25 UTC

The story is good and I am interested but finding the formatting difficult to deal with. Centering everything makes it almost too difficult to read. Is there a reason you have chosen to do that?

slashfanatic22 July 6 2011, 03:18:52 UTC

Thanks for reading anyway!

And I'm sorry! It's just a personal preference...I actually find it really really hard to write with normal formatting. I'm sorry it makes it harder for you to read it. :/

nightingale_29 July 6 2011, 11:16:39 UTC

I've had trouble with this format too I couldn't finish your last fic because of it.

I think it's a case of where your eyes go people don't read down the middle they read left to right. Perhaps, if it's just writing in normal format you have trouble with, you could write it central then when you post it use left hand justification.

Sorry just thought I'd throw out a suggestion that might help :)

jimpage363 July 6 2011, 20:11:10 UTC

And I'm sorry! It's just a personal preference...I actually find it really really hard to write with normal formatting. I'm sorry it makes it harder for you to read it. :/

You may want to consider getting over that. After all, the standardized formatting is there to essentially make the form invisible so that people can concentrate on the imagery and language of the writing.
Just a thought from someone who considers communication and language pretty frequently. (And, of course, I've written a fair amount of fic, too.)

crzymm3 July 6 2011, 02:15:55 UTC

Oh sad Tony is not good.
Hope I did not mess it up last chapter by guessing.
Like this story lots can't wait for new chapter.

slashfanatic22 July 6 2011, 03:19:47 UTC

I know! Even Gibbs couldn't resist giving him a hug!

Thanks so much for reading!! :D

goldylost July 6 2011, 04:08:44 UTC

Ohhhh no poor Tony!!!!!! Hope that Gibbs TLC part will be up soon

maldeluxx July 6 2011, 04:10:13 UTC

*ahh* I'm glad that Gibbs knows now, and has the boat to use for pondering this. And I'm glad Tony doesn't have to hide it so much now *hugs both*

lin71 July 6 2011, 05:27:13 UTC

This has got to be hard for Tony and I totally get that he doesn't want any pity. That doesn't help and only makes you feel worse.

Gibbs doesn't seem like the pitying type though. Compassionate yes, pitying not so much.

Can't wait to see how this ends but I'm hoping it's ending well for both of them.