The Awesome Adventures of Abby Sciuto and Tony DiNozzo (Chapter 3/7)

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Okay, just warning everyone- I really had to force myself to write this chapter-I wasn't really in the mood. So if it's terrible PLEASE tell me and I'll redo it :)

Title: The Awesome Adventures of Abby Sciuto and Tony DiNozzo (Chapter 3/7)
Rating: R (will probably go up)
Characters: Tony DiNozzo, Gibbs, Ducky, mentions of Kady Baker (OC) and Abby

Comments

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way to stop at the good part!!!

just a little fyi:
"Something that he didn’t, that no on, had control over."

you forgot the e in no one :D

but i enjoyed this part; i wish we got to see gibbs' reaction! :)

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(and btw the whole part was good, i meant, you stopped when there would have been potential serious tony/gibbs moments!)

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Thanks for the heads up! The "e" should be there now. I knew I should have done another read-through to make sure I caught everything LOL!

Cliffhanger! I know. Don't worry the next part will continue directly from that point....and there could be a moment ;)

I'm glad you liked it, I was nervous because I had such a hard time writing it (The words just wouldn't come!)

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

[rosebud_26]

This was great...even if you *did* stop just as it was getting good. ;-)

I loved that Tony couldn't figure out who was staring at him (and his tattoo) but it looks like that's about to change! (I hope)

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Lol I couldn't resist leaving a cliffhanger!

You just might find out who was staring at Tony in the next chapter ;)

I'm so happy you like it! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D

[singer_s_lament]

Way to stop just when it was getting really interesting and Gibbs has to pick his tongue up off of the floor. I love this fic.

[slashfanatic22]

Haha I'm evil I know LOL! I thought Gibbs actually being speechless would be fun.

I'm so happy you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading and commenting!! :D