Hot summer nights [Star Trek!Reboot, Jim/Bones, future imperfect]

[slashfairy]

It's the Jack Daniels in the lemonade that throws Jim at first

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[stormatdusk]

off in his memories somewhere Jim's never been with him

to do nothing, between the day and the night

lovely. *likes likes likes*

[slashfairy]

thank you. for everthing.

[inspiredlife]

Oh, this is absolutely lovely. There's so much depth and poignancy here.

[slashfairy]

thank you! i don't hear them often, but stormatdusk said something last night, and then there they were.

[laura_iskra]

wow, love this!

[slashfairy]

thank you! don't drop in here often, but sometimes, thanks to stormatdusk, i overhear something like this.

[not_a_lamb]

This is lovely, hon.

I especially like the tine in the last paragraph. So resigned, and fond.

And your word choice in relations to the word "branch" (as in "passed down in a branch of the family Bones never knew") in reference to something made of WOOD! Made me smile big.

And the way you describe Bones drinking... Lordy! That "glass-tipping head-tipping-back throat-stretching swallow"...? I could totally see his adam's apple rising and falling as he drank that last sip. SO GOOD!

[slashfairy]

Thanks!
they just come, yanno? and then I'm grateful.

[foxrafer]

This is lovely.