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slashedsilver

with lips more scar tissue than skin

Jun 16, 2015 16:30

Title: with lips more scar tissue than skin
Author: slashedsilver
Pairing: Cha Hakyeon/Lee Hongbin
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 9,200 words in total
Warnings: None
Summary: Hongbin stops the company car to pick up a hooker on a cold street corner. It's the best and worst mistake he's ever made.

Author's Note: This fic is dedicated to alesserrain, fanclub president, because ( Read more... )

fic, the black hole of kpop, vixx

Comments 16

alphanumerunes June 17 2015, 16:20:00 UTC

ooh it's finally here on LJ! I'm not gonna repeat my comments. but perhaps i could interest you in more hangover poetry?

yeah, we've got this city.
the world within our pinky.
two bottles for a dime
an idea for a rhyme.

OKAY SORRY.
Bowing out here.
Peace, out.

(damn it Ravi has a BAD influence on me)

slashedsilver June 18 2015, 01:59:09 UTC

HIII thanks for more hangover poetry. And of course #freeideas.com. You gave me an essay of comments already, much appreciated :')

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slashedsilver June 18 2015, 01:56:38 UTC

Awwww thanks so much! :') I've made some changes from the ficathon that you'll see as it unfolds!

ARE THEY BROTHERS
Got it in one!

i thought of leader responsibilities
Screams this is making me cry too. /hugs and clings in solidarity

Throw all your feels at me because I will accept them willingly! Thanks for the lovely comment! ♥

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Re: commenting on part 2, too~! slashedsilver June 21 2015, 10:34:25 UTC

You are SO sweet dear thanks for adding comments for part two too ♥♥♥

me on the floor. because this is literally real-life right there.
Ahhh I hadn't realised I'd translated that part into Hongbin's character in the AU too but I guess it snuck in ;) I'm glad you spotted that too!

And I'll let you know when the next part goes up, probably tomorrow~ Glad you're enjoying it!

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wykedpanda June 18 2015, 02:06:20 UTC

so fab~ i adore this au and i am so happy and proud you finished it (thank you, Rai, for pushing her to finish this lol). and there was no pretense-- these installments had me very excited ^^

slashedsilver June 18 2015, 15:45:57 UTC

Awww sweetest thank you for your kind words :') I couldn't have done it without you guys screaming into chat/enthusiastic anon comments! I'm amazed that I completed it too, I haven't worded like this since December. So. Thank you. A lot ♥

p_swizzle June 19 2015, 23:52:57 UTC

i'm crying at this whole fic ;;;

also i see that you've revised + added on to some parts to make it more cohesive? /claps

i'm actually very happy it has no !sexytimes because then i wouldn't read it haha \o/

looking forward to the next update hehe <33333

slashedsilver June 20 2015, 00:28:22 UTC

Yes! It went through some heavy revision and a lot of squinting and a bit of "I don't want to write this anymore" so I'm glad you like the outcome :D

Don't worry, I know what you mean about the sexytimes ;) I'll let you know when it updates! I was aiming every two or three days or so.

p_swizzle June 22 2015, 20:31:34 UTC

WAIT THIS WAS INSPIRED BY THE POEM!?!?! Love, love, love, love this fic. This is my spot.

slashedsilver June 23 2015, 11:15:55 UTC

Haha actually no! I'd written most of it (except I think the last part) when my friend sent me the poem and said it made her think of it. The last section was probably inspired by the poem though :) I really did enjoy it. And now when I read it it's like N/Hongbin for me.

darkyulate June 25 2015, 05:00:51 UTC

Hongbin is thankful that he's holding a cup of coffee in each hand. He doesn't know what he might have tried if his hands were free.
I was really glad he didn't throw the coffee at them. Whew.

So I read this for the concrit event and felt the need to comment because I felt so much for it

slashedsilver June 25 2015, 06:48:43 UTC

I was really glad he didn't throw the coffee at them.
HAHAHA YUKI!! No, he was going to do something embarrassing like hug Hakyeon. Or that was what I'd planned before I let him keep his dignity ;)

Aww thank you for reading this :') I struggled a lot balancing both POV and giving them both enough screentime but I'm glad they came across as full characters with their own unique trajectories.

darkyulate June 25 2015, 08:11:32 UTC

but if he hugged hakyeon tho!!!! it would mean that he (almost threw) poured the coffee all over him... same thing haha i'm pretty sure I would have done something with the coffee at least... or maybe not? because coffee >>>>>>> person i love??????? hahhahaa

you're welcome! it deserves all the praise! usually there'd be some confusion when switching POVs but it just made you fic REALLY BETTER AND GREAT AND AMAZING. WOOOOW