"The Alignment of the Planets" for idiosyncratic - Lotrips SlashaBaby 2012

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Title: The Alignment of the Planets
Recipient: idiosyncratic
Author: shegollum
Pairing: Karl/Viggo
Rating: R
Summary: Karl has being feeling pretty freakin' conflicted lately and now seems like just the right time to get a few things straight.

Comments

[foxrafer]

I like that Karl may be confused by his feelings but he doesn't try and deny them, and Ian's little nudge is great. I imagine they'll be running down each other's lists for a while. :-)

[shegollum]

I'm so glad you liked it. I love writing Ian even just a little,. :-) Thank you for your feedback.

[idiosyncratic]

Oh, this was lovely. Karl's confusion and anxiety, the way he steps up and faces them, Viggo's assurance (coupled with HIS anxiety that maybe Karl's just doing this for a lark), the ebb and flow of everything around them...all just absolutely wonderful. Thank you so much, mystery writer!!

[shegollum]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :-) I struggled a bit and it makes me very happy to know it gave you a smile. Happy 2013!

[itstonedme]

Such a great pairing, and not an ounce of anything but alpha in your rendition.

The bastard was as much of a mongrel as ever...

I knew the feeling without a doubt. I'd just never felt it for someone with a cock swinging between their legs.

my cock reacted like a fucking metal bar in response to that magnet.

I very much enjoyed that it was told from Karl's POV so that his confusion, his attraction, his capitulation is something we're able to feel and taste nearly as much as he does. Scruffy Viggo. Pretty hard to resist, especially when it's being offered so unreservedly.

[shegollum]

I love 'alpha'. :-) It's that whole crash of men that's so awesome in my little head. No 12 year old girly men. LOL Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.