Fic: "Dreamscapes and Daisy Chains" for savageseraph in the 2009 Lotrips Slashababy fic

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Title: Dreamscapes and Daisy Chains
Recipient: savageseraph (2nd story)
Author: dancingbarefoot
Pairing: Miranda, David and a host of others seen.
Rating: NC-17
Warning violent BDSM
Summary: Life isn't always what is expected, it can be defragmented and rough and yet you can still know what you want, even if you can't verbalize it.
Notes: Merry Christmas to my giftee, may it

Comments

[savageseraph]

This fic has the same sort of almost dreamy quality to it as the first. I like how this one has a perspective outside of Miranda's to give another point of view on her, and there are some lovely images in this fic. Things like this, " She was a canvas for blood swirls and open cuts, feeling the burns long after the candle was snuffed out, hiding the rope burns under the shy smile of a courtesan who knew never to talk too much," and this, "There was want and need. He wasn't force and animalistic, he wasn't passion and heat, there wasn't even like on the nights when she would rail off the list of names that was designed to remind her of what had brought her to this moment and also to remind him of where she had been, of being used as a weapon to bring him down off the marble pillar of control.

She wanted him to be the steel blade, to slice into her skin and lance this need from her body."

Thanks so much!

[foxrafer]

So intense. There are many phrases that I like in this, your writing is very evocative.