Comments | slashababy: For <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/ipso__facto">ipso_

slashababy_mod in slashababy

For ipso__facto: Palm to Palm

Dec 31, 2008 14:31

Title: Palm to Palm
Recipient: ipso__facto
Author: eff_reality
Pairing: Billy/Orlando; Billy/Dom; Billy/Dom/Orlando
Rating: PG-13
Pre-reveal Notes: FYI, Orlando's "I resemble that remark!" is intentional. See Urban Dictionary for an explanation.
Post-reveal Notes: My first born will be named after the lovely and the talented Beta of Love, sandelwood.

( read the story )

stories 2008

Comments 18

msilverstar January 3 2009, 23:42:16 UTC

Gorgeous, complicated, beautifully written. I love that Billy loves Dom but that's not everything.

what a line: Dom could find a way to turn on wallpaper.

eff_reality January 8 2009, 16:50:26 UTC

Thank you so much, dearie. I'm glad it worked for you!

slashfairy January 4 2009, 07:35:48 UTC

for just that moment there, i Hated this Dom. just that moment. even though i can see how it happens, how each one ends up where he does, how it might go in future. but oh, oh... i cried.

lovely.

eff_reality January 8 2009, 17:04:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I hate to inspire ill feelings toward Dom, but a reaction of any kind is good. :)

cordeilla33 January 4 2009, 17:21:15 UTC

Wow! This was surprisingly good. I usually read only Monaboyd cause threesomes and moresomes I feel get in the way of my fav pairing, but this was wonderful. I loved the conversations between them and how casual and realistic the moments between them were. And that pining from Orli was great and the way Billy grabbed Orli's hand was so endearing. Great Job!

eff_reality January 8 2009, 17:09:29 UTC

Hey there, lady! Quite frankly, I'm shocked that you gave this a shot at all. :)

I felt like a bit of a traitor to the OTP while writing it, but I ultimately enjoyed it and I'm glad you did too!

giselleslash January 18 2009, 00:08:57 UTC

Wow.

That's pretty much all I can say at this point *g*

I don't normally read this pairing but this was just brilliantly written. The way you characterized each of them was so very perfect for this. I loved the fact that Billy wanted Orlando but wouldn't admit it to Dom then Orlando ended up as the third in their threesome anyway...and wanted Billy himself. I just adored the, I'm. Here. For. You.

Gorgeous.

eff_reality January 18 2009, 16:40:02 UTC

*squeal* Thank you!

I don't normally read this pairing but
This is one of the best things to hear.

Thank you so much! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it.