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Everything I Try to Do, Nothing Ever Seems to Turn Out Right (fanfiction-Bleach)

Jun 23, 2010 10:42

Title: Everything I Try to Do, Nothing Ever Seems to Turn Out Right
Author: slash4femme
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing/Category:Urahara/Ichigo
Rating: NC-17
Warning:sex, clothing kink, hair pulling, a tiny bit of angst, swearing.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, I do not make money off of doing this. The only thing I'm getting out of ( Read more... )

urahara/ichigo, bleach

Comments 7

freakinmi June 24 2010, 01:22:33 UTC

Ah, I liked this very much!

Been a while since I've read any U/I which is a shame since it's my OPT!

You did a really nice job. Both of them are in character and you've gotten down teir thoughts and feelings very well. You've even managed to work on the points I love the most in this pairing, and it makes them seem so perfect for each other.

And yes, Urahara in 'normal' clothes are stunning! I do not blame Ichigo for falling for it =)

Go write more now? =3

slash4femme June 24 2010, 01:52:38 UTC

thank you so much for your lovely moment.

freyalilith June 25 2010, 10:07:50 UTC

Awwww, very nice fic! It was so feelgood and its left me in such a good mood! I loved the interaction between Ichi and Ura, so cute!
Urahara is a major p*rnsta in normal clothes!
Certainly hope to see more!

slash4femme June 25 2010, 14:39:40 UTC

thank you!

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slash4femme February 4 2011, 13:19:49 UTC

thank you.

fullmetalfire April 7 2011, 20:05:00 UTC

Aw, that was cute and terribly hot. Dammit Kisuke is pretty. Very pretty. As I'm sure half the cast of Bleach has noticed. XD

This is the first new Ichigo/Kisuke fanfic I've seen in a while. It's good. And fanservicy. Which is exactly what I was looking for. ;)

I love these two. They're so amusing. Particularly Ichigo, because he can be subtle sometimes...sort of, or at least people don't look twice at unusual behavior from him seeing as how he's a bit impulsive. Albeit, intelligently/strategically impulsive, but still.

Oh, and thanks for making Ichigo a bit older in this. Not that I mind him being paired with people at 16, since most of the cast consists of ghosts whose age varies and is questionable from a lower or hight standpoint. Thus we don't really care about it. But, it helps if Ichigo is older too. heh So, nice fic, I really enjoyed it.

slash4femme April 7 2011, 20:18:50 UTC

Thank you.