After It All 2/2 (fanfiction-Star Trek)

Nov 17, 2009 16:04

Title: After It All 2/2
Author: slash4femme

Fandom: Star Trek Reboot
Pairing/Category: Spock Prime/McCoy, Spock/Kirk
Rating: PG-13
Warning:  mental intimacy, MPreg, and talk of McCoy not being present in part of his both daughters' lives. 
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, I do not make money off of doing this. The only thing I'm getting ( Read more... )

spock/kirk, star trek reboot, have you hugged an older vulcan today?, spock prime/mccoy

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the_sexypancake November 18 2009, 05:15:27 UTC
Perfect! I loved how this ended and hope dearly for another sequel. Thank you for an amazing job well done.

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slash4femme November 18 2009, 11:57:48 UTC
wow. Thank you. Yeah when I was writing it I was thinking this might have to turn into a series.

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awarrington November 18 2009, 09:48:35 UTC
This was a lovely story. I really, really don't like mpreg stories and avoid them as a rule, but I'd already got caught up in the plot when I realised where it was going, and loving your writing, I decided to soldier on. I'm really glad I trusted you, because you made this story still about Spock and McCoy and their reactions and attitudes towards the circumstances as the plot progressed, not about the baby.

It must have been the hardest thing for McCoy, as a doctor, to feel so completely helpless and impotent in a medical situation. And Spock was so stoic throughout, lending his strength to his bondmate.

McCoy had the additional worry of not being on the ship where Jim needed him, so he was pulled in two directions. Making the decision he was going to complete the mission must have been so hard, because it was the second time in his life that he was leaving a daughter behind. My heart went out to him.

It was a wondeful read -- thank you.

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slash4femme November 18 2009, 11:59:16 UTC
thank you. Yeah generally I feel that MPreg can be very, very hit or miss and I'm really flattered that you still liked the story even though you don't generally read it. thank you so much.

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weepingnaiad November 19 2009, 07:17:38 UTC
Seriously loved this! I do feel a bit sorry for Grace, though. That's a lot of expectation on little shoulders!

So just how did Kirk/Spock get bonded?

Wonderful!

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slash4femme November 19 2009, 12:30:48 UTC
wow thank you. Yes poor Grace! She's one of those people who gets to learn early that life isn't fair. ah well, she has lot of people who love her.

Yep, yep I am totally planning on writing the story of how Spock and Kirk got bonded.

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easilymused1956 March 24 2010, 03:28:50 UTC
Very nice story.

McCoy's rather stunned reaction to being expected to become a father rang very true. He also seemed a bit overwhelmed when he was told he wasn't needed for the 'pregnancy.' And that even the sex of his child was being dictated.

I enjoyed reading how he managed to deal with things. And to finally make his own wishes known.

Renee

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slash4femme March 24 2010, 11:58:15 UTC
aw thank you, I'm glad you liked this.

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