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[slapstickhero]

█ ✫ NOSTALGIA ··· ( oneshot )
█ pairing: Jongyu
█ rating: PG
█ genre: Fluff

█ summary:
Jinki's feeling a little sentimental. Jonghyun doesn't mind.

✫ ··· author's note:
An overdue present for the ever-patient miss rudyard.

Comments

[potaoto]

oh, oh this lovely story♥ i normally don't read first person pov in fic but you wrote it so well and it wasn't awkward at all. i love the tone you wrote this in, the words you used, just everything, because it's all so very jonghyun. i also really love your jinki haha, so cute♥

this entire fic was beautiful, but i loved the first kiss bit the best ;-; i want to quote that entire section back at you!! ;-; but here, have these instead:
It shines in pieces in your eyes, like a reflection on the ripples of a pond.
I wonder why I find it so hard to ask for it, so I can keep it safe in the breast pocket of my rotting old leather jacket, right against mine.
guh, my heart ♥ your writing is so pretty ♥

[slapstickhero]

I don't normally write in first person at all, either, so I'm glad it didn't seem awkward or forced or anything. I just sort of... Happened as I was writing it. LOL~

Thank you so much for reading~ ❤

[rudyard]

Spot for me ;__; your number one fan.

[owlus]

HOW COME I SPOTTED IN SEPTEMBER WHAT EHWAKGJSEG I AM SUCH A BAD PERSON THOUGH, WHY AM I EVEN LIKE THIS AT GKSDJNKGNDSGKJNSKGJN

how you wrapped everything around nostalgia was perfect. every time meant something important and it will always be. every time i read jongyu i always get such a domestic feel from them both.

THE REALNESS can taste the butter from the popcorn you had in the theatre. When I put the hand not holding yours against your jaw you lean against my palm, and our teeth click together. IT IS SO REAL TO ME

this mmw MAKES ME WEEP

i cry because even though jinki worries and he knows that things are sorta not okay but they are okay and jonghyun constantly wants to reassure him and this is basically how i see their relationship. jinki is the worry-wart and jonghyun is his security; his safe haven.

perfect ;;

[blitzkickz]

Ah this is so perfect. I love the dynamic between Jinki and Jonghyun. It's so beautiful.

Even though Jonghyun seems to be the crazy hardcore kind of guy, with the leather jacket and playing electric bass, he may be more sensitive that Jinki. Whereas Jinki may b the clumsy dork who I think dominates the relationship.

I rarely get to play more than ten minutes at a time when you're home, though. Horny teenager me was right - it's a pretty good way to get laid.

Yup I can see Jinki directing everything after his seduction by Jonghyun ahaha.

I absolutely love this.
(and I love how you had Jinki play cello. I play cello too and I named him after Jinki XD)

Thank youfor writing and sharing!!

[slapstickhero]

I've always seen Jonghyun as this great big contradictory personality - hard and soft edges all at once. It somehow works for him. x3 And I've always felt Jinki was the sort of person who had no idea of his own powers of persuasion. People just gravitate towards him, and want to dote on him, without him really meaning it to happen. xD

And, no, thank you for reading! ❤

[oconje]

Bravo! This is so well written, romantic, sweet, nostalgic...just lovely.

[slapstickhero]

Thank you muchly~! ❤

[volatileflame]

this was beautiful! ;^; <3

oh, but wanted to point out, it was Noah with the Ark, not Moses.

[slapstickhero]

Oh wow, oops. Thank you for pointing that out! I shall now edit that and we shall never speak of it again. x3

This is what I get for writing at two AM, I suppose. OTL