I felt a little desperate...

[alexkfan]

I'm terribly sorry that this isn't beta'd but I don't know anyone who could do it for me and I've reread it 3 times so I'm sure I have no errors.It is my first post ever on slacken_ties and i just hope that no one is up to bashing this...
If it is so terrible that you can not stand my

Comments

[thejemmas]

STAY
i command you

this is good :D
and yes - nerd nick is rather original - i like

[roman_gnome]

E-gasp! Please continue- this first part's got me hanging!!

[alexkfan]

i already wrote the second part and i'll put it up today.

Thanks for liking it guys!

[sd_kuri]

WOW! This is good. I'm already hooked! Better not go anywhere. You must stay and finish the story. Or...