What the DI saw (Part 2)

[skywise012000]

Chapter 2

Rating :  Brown Cortina (for the secksi bits)
Pairing :  Gene/Alex
Word Count : 2,000 approx
Disclaimer :  The characters are not mine, they belong to the nice people at Kudos.  The fevered imaginings are, I'm ashamed to say, mine.  Please don't tell my Mum

A/N : For those of you who might be wondering, there is no plot whatsoever in this

Comments

[louella72]

Oh god. Can't breathe. Amazing.

And really, really want a sequel.

[skywise012000]

ROFL

Thanks lou.

There will be another chapter I think - after all, I wouldn't be cruel enough to leave you with a cliffhanger *snerk*

[dorsetgirl]

Oh for Christ's sake, woman, I don't read het, all right? *fans self*

Seriously, I love the way you've rooted this so firmly in the vision of Gene, rather than directly in Alex's own experience. And what a vision it is. I must remember it next time I need a

she wanted nothing more than to get her hands on him ... make him writhe and beg before taking him inside her and shagging him into oblivion.

I feel like that every time I see him appear on the screen. You've really caught how it feels, so I'm clearly not the only one!

Oh, and brilliant description of him as he arrives at the breakfast table. Perfect.

[skywise012000]

Aw thanks for that and, just so you know, you're definitely not the only one!

Gene is always the focus of attention for me. I'm really not that fond of Alex - although she is starting to grow on me now she's less whiney and bitchy - but she's a good foil for getting my lascivious little pervings out. She's a useful alter ego who can do all the things I'd like to but obviously can't. *g*

I don't read that much het either and, talking of which, when are we going to get some more slashy Gene'n'Sam goodness from you?

[dorsetgirl]

I don't get much time for writing at the moment, but I have a piece for Survival which has been bugging me for ages. This morning I think I've finally worked out how to tie it together, so maybe I'll be able to post that soon. (No sexing yet, though. Sam's still not quite well enough, although God knows I am Gene is.)

[anethema_device]

I've said it before, and I will say it again.

WRITE.MORE.NOW!!!

After I have seen you for lunch obvioulsly. *grin*

[bubbles234]

Erm.

Guh. Best hangover cure in the world ever.

Oh lord...

[cortina_quattro]

o dear sweet god...

Um. Brilliant so far (both chapters). Juuuust what I needed on an already overly-hormonal day, LOL. Seriously can't wait to read more!